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Sunday, 8 December 2013

P.A.S.S. The Parcel!

She was all dressed up waiting anxiously...
The gravity of the situation was deadly!

They were coming to 'see' her at her home!
Her parents had overdone things for their welcome!

Her eyes met his; her heart was her's no longer! 
His clean shaven look bowled her over!*

 Everyone said their jodi^ looked super-hot!
Their marriage was fixed instantly on the spot!

 When they returned, the Groom was confronted!
His sister had won the bet; her prize she demanded!

 He remembered those days when he had faced rejections.
The girls he had met, towards him, had negative reactions.

"What's the problem? Why is no girl choosing me?"
"I don't want to be a Bachelor; I really want to marry!"
 

"I was surprised to see a parcel with my name on it."**
"When I had opened, I found a Shaving Kit with a chit!"

"Dear Brother, If you don't shave & bid bye to your stubble,
Your marriage-prospects are as permanent as a bubble!

Tell me, which smart & pretty girl in her right mind,
Would choose an unkempt partner; she's not blind!

Just use this Shaving Kit & become clean-shaven!
Marriage will be fixed on Earth, though made in Heaven!"

"Yes, you are absolutely right, my dear Sister!" he said,
"Losing my Stubble has made me gain! I'm impressed!"

His sister said, "PASSing the Parcel was my pleasure!"
"Your successful 'match-fixing' is my prize- my treasure!"

"Smelly & Unhygienic stubble is an absolute no-no!"
"Glad you listened to me and impressed Bhabhi^^, Dear Bro!"


^- Jodi- 'Pair' in Hindi
^^- Bhabhi- 'Sister-in-law' in Hindi

**This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

*This post is a part of an Activity in association with BlogAdda.



This is my First Post for P.A.S.S. I was tagged by Sammya Brata in his Post HERE

I would like to tag the 5 Bloggers- Sangeeta Reghu, Amrita, Preethi Venugopal, Preethi & Priyanka.

(This is an invitation for you to write a Post for P.A.S.S. Do mention me as the Tagger! Let's play the tagging game & make our chain larger!)

17 posts I have written:

17. PAUSitive Mr.Right! 
16. The PAUSitive Sketch
15. The Most PAUSitive Person-III
14. The Most PAUSitive Person-II
13. The Most PAUSitive Person-I
12. PAUSitive Reunion
11. ABCD Of PAUS
10. PAUSitive Choice!
9. Do Not Disturb While We P.A.U.S.!
8. PASS The Proposal!
7. PASS The Attention!
6. PASS With Jai Siya-Ram!
5. The Perfect Guy To make A PASS!
2. Bollywood Heroines- Reel & Real PASS Choice! &
1. P.A.S.S. The Parcel!



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44 comments:

  1. Sangrywords8 December 2013 at 00:57

    Anita Brilliant - not saying just for the heck of it ... but it's really good and very interesting take on the stubble .. I will try to come with something :D

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 01:08

      Thanks Sangeeta! :) Delighted that you liked it!
      Looking forward to your Post :)

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  2. Unknown8 December 2013 at 02:30

    Now this is brilliant! Imagine how easy it would be to find a mate if all the guy had to do was shave and splash on some aftershave. Sometimes it only takes a little effort to make dreams reality. ♥

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:40

      Thanks Kathy! Your 'brilliant' comment makes my day. :)
      True, a little bit of time & effort & dreams turn real! :)

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  3. Suzy8 December 2013 at 07:01

    Loved your poem, yes true clean shaven men certainly look better groomed. Nice one.
    dropping by from the prompt.
    Suzy-Someday Somewhere

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:42

      Thanks for stopping by, Suzy :) Delighted that you loved it!
      Do drop in often :)

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  4. Seeta8 December 2013 at 07:13

    Hehehe nice one :-) today and tomo are unfortunately busy days, I'll def. do it this week :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:43

      Thanks Seeta :) Do take your time to post! :)

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  5. disha8 December 2013 at 08:50

    Hi Anita , have been meaning to write for this one , will do it soon.
    P. S. Super cute btw.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:45

      Sure Disha! Eager to read your entry :)
      Glad that you liked mine!

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  6. Amrita Sabat8 December 2013 at 14:08

    Woooow sch a nice poem! Very creative! M sure no one can com up wid sch nice stuff centring around stubble!! :D Keep up d gr8 wrk n hope u win!

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:48

      Thanks Amrita for your appreciation and wish :)
      The amount of creativity and ideas amazes me here! This Post of mine is just a drop in the ocean. Lots of interesting entries are sure-shot! :)

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    2. Amrita Sabat15 December 2013 at 09:49

      I've accepted your PASS tag here: http://amritasabat.blogspot.in/2013/12/stubble-spells-trouble.html . I've tagged U so plz accept mine too! :)

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    3. Anita Sabat15 December 2013 at 15:37

      Thank you so much Amrita for your response! Your poem is so cool & creative! I laughed such a lot :) I still have pending tags to finish... As assured, the last 1 is reserved for you!

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  7. Pallavi8 December 2013 at 15:13

    Lovely write-up Anita and thanks for the Tag :)

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:49

      Thanks Pallavi :) The pleasure is mine! Hope you respond and post your entry for the same :)

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  8. The Mukhtiars8 December 2013 at 18:04

    Nice one

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  9. Maniparna8 December 2013 at 18:23

    Wow Anita..its wonderful ! :-D

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:55

      Thanks Maniparna :) So glad you liked it :) Will be tagging you too! :)

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  10. Preethi Venugopala8 December 2013 at 18:29

    Thank you for the Tag Anita...I have done a post..

    Yours is awesome...

    See mine here http://tulipsandme.blogspot.in/2013/12/pass-his-clean-shaven-look-bowled-me.html

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 19:58

      Thanks a lot Preethi for responding to my tag. :)
      Loved your cool & sweet story. Best wishes! :)

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  11. Unknown8 December 2013 at 20:32

    Thanks for acknowledging the tag! :)
    Nice post! Cheers...I have got a second post up as well though!

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 21:03

      My pleasure, Sammya :) Thanks for tagging me!
      Glad you liked it :) You have another cool Post! Just read it! :)

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  12. Vijay Prabhu8 December 2013 at 20:46

    Nice post, Anita and dont worry about the PR just carry on the good work and you will win more hearts and minds :)

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    1. Anita Sabat8 December 2013 at 21:06

      Thanks for stopping by, Vijay & for the heart-warming encouragement! :) Means a lot to me!
      Surely, tough times don't last, tough people do! Delighted :)

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  13. Words Kraft8 December 2013 at 23:05

    Wonderful...It actually is worth reading a multiple times..

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    1. Anita Sabat9 December 2013 at 11:57

      Thanks Soham for taking time out & sharing your Wonderful comment!
      Really touched that you find it worthy for multiple views. :)

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  14. Arvind Passey9 December 2013 at 01:07

    Nicely written poem. All the best!
    Have tagged you in my latest post - the fourth one. Do check & respond.

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Anita Sabat9 December 2013 at 12:01

      Delighted you liked it!
      Thanks for your wish & for tagging me. I shall respond with my 4th Post soon. :)

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  15. Anil Krishnanunni9 December 2013 at 01:09

    I wonder how you manage all these rhymes Anita Ma'm :D Brilliant and hilarious as always!

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    1. Anita Sabat9 December 2013 at 12:05

      Anil, I love making up rhymes. Sometimes, when I'm writing prose, I end up writing poems! I am so glad you enjoy reading them! Thanks for the great adjectives :) They inspire me!

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  16. Arish Dhawan9 December 2013 at 12:17

    I was going to comment for the post, but then my eyes eyed your introduction.. "+ Anita, Tusi great ho" :D

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    1. Anita Sabat9 December 2013 at 12:27

      Thanks, but that's too much, Arish! :) *Blushes* :)
      Please do comment for the Post! Comments motivate us to excel & better ourselves. :)

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  17. Unknown9 December 2013 at 13:08

    Its brilliant and the way you have rhymed about an offbeat tale.. awesome!!
    And thanks for the tag.. I shall write for it and can i tag you back as well?

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    1. Anita Sabat10 December 2013 at 02:04

      Thanks Priyanka for visiting and sharing! Glad you liked it!
      Please do write and yes, you can tag me too! :)

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  18. Uma Anandane9 December 2013 at 16:40

    Hi Anita, thanks for visiting my blog and accepting my tag :)

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    1. Anita Sabat10 December 2013 at 02:06

      Uma, Thanks for tagging me. I will shortly submit my post for your Tag :)
      Using FIFO now :)

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  19. Rat9 December 2013 at 19:20

    wow this is brilliant, Anita.. and smart usage of the 'two' prompts ;)

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    1. Anita Sabat10 December 2013 at 02:12

      Thanks Meera :)
      Ek Post se Do Prompts! :)
      Remember, earlier you had combined two for the Prayer+WOW Prompts & how impressive it was! I tried it as I was travelling and time was the constraint! :)

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  20. Anonymous16 December 2013 at 23:54

    Absolutely love this post of yours ,innocent as well as creative ....all he best for ur contest

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    1. Anita Sabat17 December 2013 at 13:16

      Thanks a lot for your kind words & wish! Absolutely delighted :)

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  21. Ruchita.23 December 2013 at 23:10

    Hahah,Crazy. I love it!

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    1. Anita Sabat28 December 2013 at 05:17

      Thank you so much, Ruchita :) Glad you love it!

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