Sunday, 22 December 2013

Do Not Disturb While We P.A.U.S.!


Two brothers, Ram and Lakhan, had married two sisters, Sita and Gita respectively. The newly-married couples lived together. 

The two brothers had to leave for official work while the two sisters decided to visit their parent’s place. 

All was well till yesterday when Sita & Gita returned only to find a messy home, and 'unclean' husbands, who had grown stubbles!

Sita: “What have you done?”

Gita: “Just because we were out for a few days, doesn’t permit you to take revenge like this!”

Ram: “We thought you would like our new look! Everyone did!”

Lakhan: “We got compliments from our staff & friends that we look 'hot' & 'rough & tough'!”

Sita: “Oh Really? You must change your staff & friends then! I hate that unclean stubble.”

Gita: “So do I! BTW, only 17% females have no problem with the cleanliness of men with Stubble. We belong to the majority- 83%*. You both look like GUNDAY^!”

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Ram & Lakhan felt terrible as Sita & Gita decided to teach them a lesson. The two ladies actually locked themselves up in the Guest Room last night! 

When their husbands knocked their door and asked for forgiveness, their wives wrote “DO NOT DISTURB (While We P.A.U.S.)” in a paper and passed it from the space below the door!

[P.A.U.S = Protest Against Unclean Stubble]

What a punishment! 

But, the husbands were smart! They immediately used their razors & hey presto had the clean-shaven look! 

Next, they employed Technology- sent their latest pics to their respective wife’s Smartphones! 

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Their (husbands) clean shaven look bowled them (wives) over!

Plus, their husbands had also sent to their smartphones- the amazing Bryan Adams song- ‘Please Forgive ME’!

Needless to say, the locked door opened!





*83% Women think men with stubble haven’t taken bath.
^Gunday – Goons, in Hindi. Also, a Hindi-Movie that is scheduled to release in Feb. 2014.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

This post is a part of an activity.

 This is my Ninth Post for P.A.U.S. 
I was tagged by Amrita in her Post HERE. 




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36 comments:

  1. Pallavi22 December 2013 at 09:09

    Amazing! Sita , Gita, Ram and Lakhan :) All the best for the contest my dear and thanks a bunch for voting for me at the expats blog awards. Big jhappi ur way :)

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    1. Anita Sabat22 December 2013 at 15:47

      Thanks a lot Pallavi for your wish :) Delighted you liked my story.
      Voting for you is my pleasure! May you win the Award :)

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  2. Cifar22 December 2013 at 18:21

    nice fun story combining two prompts.

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  3. Rat22 December 2013 at 19:37

    good one. every time you amaze us with your interesting posts.. liked it :)

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  4. Unknown22 December 2013 at 20:35

    Haha! Including "Gunday" and "Please forgive me" was gold!
    Btw, is PAUS new? I thought it was PASS? (Sorry, I don't really follow contests... But I am surious)

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 14:18

      Thanks Sreesha! I love 'gold' :)
      Both PASS & PAUS are the same- 3rd letter refers to 'Smelly' & 'Unclean' respectively :) PAUS is the new term referring to the same contest.

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    2. Unknown24 December 2013 at 21:54

      Ohh! And that word was "curious" not "surious"!

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    3. Anita Sabat25 December 2013 at 01:21

      Yes, of course, I got that Sreesha! The main aim of communication is to get ourselves understood! And you manage it gr8! Spelling errors may creep in; happens often with me! :)

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  5. Richa Singh22 December 2013 at 21:23

    Well I love my husband in a stubble so though the post is funny it is all fiction for me :P

    Richa

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 14:21

      It's indeed Fiction, Richa :) But, truth is stranger than fiction :)
      Yes, some women like the stubble, majority prefer clean-shaven :P

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  6. Ashwin Kumar22 December 2013 at 23:13

    haha.. interesting post!

    My Entry for 'Do Not Disturb'

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 14:22

      Thanks for stopping by, Ashwin :) Delighted that you liked!

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  7. Maniparna23 December 2013 at 01:32

    Another great post on P.A.U.S ..:-D

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  8. Indrani23 December 2013 at 09:48

    Your posts are entertaining Anita. :)

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  9. Unknown23 December 2013 at 12:43

    Nice Post!!
    I have acknowledged your tag in my post http://www.eatoutsdelhi.net/2013/12/jill-let-stubble-go-at-7o-clock.html
    and tagged you accept mine too.

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 14:27

      Thanks Aditya :)
      Thank you so much for acknowledging my tag so fast :) I have many pending tags. Trying to honor as many as possible...

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  10. ...shabab khan23 December 2013 at 12:45

    If this is what you really think then i am the most unclean creature in the world.
    But my wife says I look lyk SRK of Chak De India.

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 14:32

      Sure, Shabab, Wives know best! Hubbies have to please their wives :)
      This Post is for the PAUS Activity that upholds clean-shaven just as per the statistics where a majority of women support it!
      No offence meant. Some women do find the stubble cool :) 'SRK of Chak De India' Title is too good for you. If Biwi raazi, then kya karega kaazi? :)
      Best wishes to you!
      Thank you so much for stopping by & reading :)

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  11. Unknown23 December 2013 at 15:10

    No worries...won't disturb :P

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 20:16

      Thanks for stopping by, Sammya :) Most welcome, No disturbance :P

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  12. Veena23 December 2013 at 15:22

    Interesting P.A.U.S. !!!
    Nice post Anita
    Good Luck and Best Wishes.. :)

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    1. Anita Sabat23 December 2013 at 20:18

      Thanks Veena for all the luck & wishes. Much needed :)
      Delighted you liked it :)

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  13. Unknown23 December 2013 at 16:31

    Hi

    I've nominated you for a Liebster...

    Go check this - http://beingmommee.blogspot.in/2013/12/my-first-liebster-award.html

    Regards
    Shilpa

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    1. Anita Sabat24 December 2013 at 01:13

      First, Heartiest Congrats to you!
      Thanks a lot, Shilpa :) Honored!
      Will accept my Award shortly, after claiming my previous ones :)

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  14. The Mukhtiars23 December 2013 at 18:53

    Good one

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    1. Anita Sabat24 December 2013 at 01:14

      Thanks a lot for reading & sharing. Delighted :)

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  15. Nikhil23 December 2013 at 22:10

    I think you have become a complete expert on this P.A.S.S posts. :)
    Every new idea of yours is more entertaining than the previous one. I seriously don't know how you do it. :D :)
    However you do it , it's good for us readers. :)

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    1. Anita Sabat24 December 2013 at 01:17

      Nikhil, Thanks for this amazing & motivating comment :) Your words inspire me to challenge myself to write better so as to uphold your statements :)
      Enthused & thrilled :)

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  16. Anmol Rawat26 December 2013 at 23:48

    You have used WOW as PASS again :D Quite smart and for post, well you should win one of those gifts at the end of the contest :)

    PASS or PAUS I don't know what to call it anymore :p

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    1. Anita Sabat27 December 2013 at 10:12

      Thanks a lot Anmol!
      However, this time I guess it wasn't good enough- didn't earn me my WOW post from BlogAdda...unlike all the others I have written so far...
      Hope the judges also share your view. :)
      PASS/PAUS- both refer to the same activity! A rose by any other name... :)

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  17. Amrita Sabat28 December 2013 at 20:37

    Woooowww!! Such a wonderful response 2 my tag! I really love this post! very highly imaginative! Thanks so mch fr doin so mch justice 2 my tag! I tagged people but only U responded...thanks again! :D Keep writing...u r only gettin better & best (just read Ur latest post..simply WOW!) !!

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    1. Anita Sabat30 December 2013 at 02:42

      Thanks a lot Amrita for your kind words! :) Glad you liked my Post. I love your WOW Comment.
      Strangely, though I received so many WOW comments, this Post isn't amongst the chosen WOW entries... :)

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