It was the
hottest-ever summer.
Liza had
never experienced such scorching heat.
Liza wasn't
prepared for what she saw next.
The sea receded
at least a kilometer away from their home on the beach!
Notable was the stump of a tree that was visible.
Her late
grandfather often told her stories of a mango tree he had planted.
Following a
devastating cyclone, the sea had moved closer and claimed it.
Now that it
had receded, buried treasures were visible after decades!
If his tree story
was true, then his piggy bank should be there too!
Liza’s "Mission Treasure" was on!
100 words story for the Friday Fictioneers
Do you think she will find her grandfather's treasure?
Oh I very much hope she does! The sea holds all sorts of secrets.
ReplyDeleteDear Anita,
ReplyDeleteHere's hoping she finds the treasure. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Buried treasure. An eduring dream
ReplyDeleteTime to get digging! Nice one!
ReplyDeleteHow wonderful! I hope she is successful!
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Anita. Your MC obviously love her grandfather very much.
ReplyDeleteSounds very exciting.
ReplyDeleteAnita, I love where your imagination took you on this one. Yes, I think she will find her grandfather's treasure. It was meant to be!
ReplyDeleteA receding sea spells Tsunami to me, I hope she doesn't look for the treasure
ReplyDeleteI love that the mango tree pointed to the treasure! Very creative use of the photo. CG
ReplyDeleteA buried treasure. What fun!
ReplyDeleteI hope she finds the piggy bank. The sea is full of mystery and treasure! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteTime to get a metal detector! (This is michele @thisobscurelife, Im having problems logging into blogger)
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