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Wednesday, 10 January 2024

I See Her Here

When I started seeing her in my dreams, I thought I had to visit her.

Where had my best-friend suddenly disappeared?

Why had she stopped receiving my phone calls and replying to my emails and messages?

I took the next flight to her city.

I went to her workplace and apartment.

When I showed her photo or asked about her, none recognized her.

They said- "No such girl ever worked or stayed here!"

I ordered coffee at her favourite coffee shop.

Photo Prompt- Susan Rouchard

There, I saw her walking towards me!

Wind gushed.


She simply vanished.

My full coffee cup was now empty.


100 words story for Friday Fictioneers

What do you think happened? Do share in the comments below.

14 comments:

  1. The timeslip is beautifully evoked

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  2. Dear Anita,

    How strange. I could feel the wind.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. It appears she is living between two parallel dimensions. Which is real, the dream world or the present world?

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  4. A tale of intrigue and mystery. Very evocative.

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  5. Granonine here. The friend must have enjoyed the coffee :) Perhaps they will meet for real very soon.

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  6. Ministry of Shrawley walks here, I like this one, very evocative as folk have said before

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  7. Interesting idea. There's something weird going on here.
    -David

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  8. Two dimensions? Oooo...I like that!
    ~ Dawn

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  9. That was beautiful and spooky at the same time!

    Brilliantly done, Anita!

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  10. Well done. I like the way they almost met.

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  11. As Mr. Spock always said .... "Fascinating" 🖖🏼

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  12. Her friend is a time lord, perhaps? Quite an intriguing story.

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  13. sometimes coffee can do wonders to one's imagination indeed. :)

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