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Wednesday, 8 December 2021

The Runaway Girl

They were after her life.

She escaped in her car.

Driving as fast as she could, she felt safe after crossing the international border. 

Her car malfunctioned and came to a halt.

Picture Prompt- Claire Fuller

She was right in front of a garage!

There was no one.

It was dark. 

Should she stay locked inside the car or venture out and see if anyone was inside the garage?

The garage’s door was outside her car’s door.

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She found herself transported to what seemed like a palace-corridor with many doors!

Photo Prompt- Miranda Kate

Which door to open?

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**Knock**

"Hey Miss! Wake up!”

“Need help?" The garage-owner asked.


100 Words Story for Friday Fictioneers.

Also linking with- #MidweekFlash Challenge Week- 229

Do you often wonder which door to open? Do your dreams seem real? 

16 comments:

  1. It doesn't matter which door she opens. All of them will have coin and jewels behind

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  2. I'm sure I've stayed in the hotel in Miranda's photo!
    I wonder which door to open whenever I stay in a hotel.

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  3. All's well that ends well!

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  4. Sounds like she was lucky the car got her that far. Not quite an A to B job...
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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  5. Dear Anita,

    Lucky she got a away.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. For just a moment there I thought we had a "Lady or Tiger" situation :). Well done, made me smile.

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  7. Very thrilling and mysterious, well done.

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  8. The twist at the end was so unexpected!

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  9. A door that is a portal. What a great disguise!

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  10. I hope the garage owner is kind to her.

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  11. Hopefully her dream won't turn out to be a premonition. Interesting!

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  12. Let's hope the garage owner is helpful. At least she got some sleep.

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  13. Nicely done story.
    The photo reminded me of walking down a hallway in a government building. The doors and lights were on sensors and operated automatically opening and lighting up as we passed by. It seemed so cosmic and surreal at the time.

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  14. Endless possibilities, now that she's made her escape.
    Pax,
    Dora

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  15. Looks like American TV Show Let's Make a Deal. You want Door # 1 or Door # 2 or Door # 3?

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  16. Nice little twist at the end there. Thanks for joining.

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