Seven-year old Gia's mother was
very sick.
Gia was heart-broken to see her
industrious mother bed-ridden.
She could not afford to lose
her only parent.
"Only a miracle can save
her," the doctor answered after checkup.
Gia knew where miracles were
available.
She did remember the real-story
her mother had told her.
Gia lost no time to visit that
place- the local church.
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| Photo Prompt- Dale Rogerson |
"Jesus, I pray for the
miracle to save my mother", Gia sincerely prayed.
There was a loud thunder and
lightning.
When she came out, Gia saw a
bright divine light in the sky.
It followed her home.
100 words story for Friday Fictioneers
Do you believe in miracles?
Gia sounds a lot like my character Melanie, I think they'd have some stories to share if they met and I hope Gia's would end happily.
ReplyDeleteNicely told.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful story on faith and miracles told in 100 words.
ReplyDeleteSweet tale...
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of a bright, divine light following someone home. Wonderful metaphor.
ReplyDeleteYour story is touching, and I believe in the power of prayer. I have to wonder, though--what do people do when there is no church building nearby? Prayer is just as effective in the hospital room as it is in the church building, yes?
ReplyDeleteMiracles are a suspension of natural law. I guess whether they exist or not depends on how many people support natural law and how many people claim to have seen its suspension
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story.
ReplyDeleteLovely story, Anita.
ReplyDeleteShalom,
Rochelle
How lovely.
ReplyDeleteThat was lovely, Anita.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story for the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHow could He not grant her a miracle? A delighful tale that sits perfectly with the picture. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine!
Touching story about the fear of loss. A sad but hopeful story.
ReplyDeleteStay Safe �� Isadora ��
Ah, the faith of children! Who knows how it ends, but we know it does not end there ...
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ReplyDeleteWell-woven.
ReplyDeleteNice one post. So interested.
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