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Wednesday, 14 October 2020

The Secret Place

"I last saw her here", the local tried to explain to the police.

They said, "Yes, we already know that! That is her bicycle." 

PHOTO PROMPT - C.E.Ayr
"But, what did you do after you had lunch with her on the 'Boat Restaurant'?"

"You both entered together, enjoyed a three-course meal, and then only you came out. Where’s she?"

They knew more than he thought they knew! 

"She escaped from there..." 

The police alerted the guards to track and catch the lady diamond-thief.

As they rushed to retrieve the diamond, he walked into his boat. 

He knew where exactly to safely hide the diamond.

100 Words Story for Friday Fictioneers

Do you think the police will catch him? What happens next? 

Do share your comments below.

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12 comments:

  1. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields14 October 2020 at 16:26

    Dear Anita,

    He sounds like a cool, calculated criminal.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Neil MacDonald14 October 2020 at 16:32

    No chance the police will catch him

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  3. C. E. Ayr14 October 2020 at 17:03

    Exciting stuff, Anita!

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  4. Tannille14 October 2020 at 19:30

    I thought the story was going to be a murder mystery. Fun twist.

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  5. Anonymous14 October 2020 at 19:35

    I was expecting a murder mystery. Fun twist A.

    - Tannille

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  6. Anonymous14 October 2020 at 19:37

    I was expecting a murder mystery. Fun twist A!

    - Tannille

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  7. Anonymous14 October 2020 at 19:40

    Sorry for the multiple comments, Blogger is mean!

    - Tannille

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  8. Susan A Eames14 October 2020 at 20:21

    Ah, I thought this story was going somewhere else entirely. Thanks for surprising me, Anita.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  9. JadeLi15 October 2020 at 00:11

    Nice diversion!

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  10. Keith's Ramblings15 October 2020 at 16:44

    So far so good, but will his luck last? Excellent Anita.

    Here's mine!

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  11. Dale16 October 2020 at 04:37

    This is not his first rodeo, apparently.

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  12. Subroto17 October 2020 at 13:43

    He is a slippery customer, he might just get away with it. Nice one.

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