After receiving a phone-call, she prayed, “God! Let this be untrue...
My Mintu can't die," before collapsing on the floor.
When she came to her senses,
she was on her bed.
Mintu entered the room with the
doctor.
"What happened?"
"I fell unconscious. Mintu
brought me to my senses and administered me syrup. I fell asleep. Thanks to
Mintu, I’m alive."
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| PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields |
The doctor and Mintu were
perplexed.
After getting an SOS, they had
entered her apartment just then.
They had climbed the stairs as
the lift was not working.
Who was there before Mintu?
She lived on the thirty-eighth floor.
100 Words story for Friday Fictioneers
How was she saved? What do you think had happened?
Have your prayers ever been answered? Do share in the comments below.
My vote is there was a wormhole in the space-time continuum
ReplyDeleteDear Anita,
ReplyDeleteI'll agree with Neil. A wormhole sounds good. Although I'm not adverse to an angel.
Shalom,
Rochelle
It was all just a dream!
ReplyDeleteAh, nice little mystery here, Anita!
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Travel, Fiction and Photos
38 floors and the lift is out. Now there is a horror story.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the mystery in your story!
ReplyDeleteAh! mystery
ReplyDeleteThat was rather strange, wasn't it?
ReplyDeleteA guardian angel
ReplyDeleteA Mintu from a parallel universe? Nice little mystery!
ReplyDeleteAn intriguing tale indeed. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine!
Intriguing.
ReplyDeleteHuh. thirty-eight floors would take some time. Maybe it was an angel.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, my prayers have been answered many times throughout my life. I am thankful.
Sorry, Anita, the phone call at the start confuses me, I don't see how it fits.
ReplyDeleteMy bad.
Yes, I have known prayers answered.
ReplyDeleteOmg. Maybe the real Mintu is dead, and her spirit visited the person before fake Mintu came in with the Doctor.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Rochelle, maybe an angel, but a worm-hole is also possible. That said, I have experienced prayers that have been answered.
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