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Wednesday, 26 February 2020

That Lady In Red

The musical performance had garnered good publicity and audience. 

He was delighted to have attended it.

The best part of the show was that he finally got to see her in flesh and blood.

He was amazed that she really existed. 

She was wearing a red gown and was looking like a queen.
He would now be able to complete his painting- 'That Lady In Red'.
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After the show, he tried to look for her.
She was nowhere to be found! 

He felt a gentle tap on his back.

Turning back, he got a surprise!
"Are you looking for me?"

100 Words story for Friday Fictioneers and #MidWeekFlashChallenge

Who do you think was trying to get in touch with him?
Do you believe in the law of attraction and that if we truly love something or someone with all our heart, we will attract them to our life?
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18 comments:

  1. Neil MacDonald26 February 2020 at 21:58

    Reminds me of my days as a theatre reviewer

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  2. Susan A Eames26 February 2020 at 22:23

    Ah, now that's left me wondering how things turned out for them. Enjoyable read, Anita.

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    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  3. Dale26 February 2020 at 23:06

    Wouldn't that be a lovely thing to happen.

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  4. Keith's Ramblings26 February 2020 at 23:31

    I think it was his wife and she'd been watching him. No? Okay.

    Here's mine!

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  5. Iain Kelly27 February 2020 at 00:42

    It has to be the woman in red - she wants to know why he was staring at her!

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  6. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields27 February 2020 at 01:14

    Dear Anita,

    how lovely to have his dream realized.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  7. KParthasarathi27 February 2020 at 06:32

    The story left a pleasant feeling.Thank you

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  8. Na'ama Yehuda27 February 2020 at 06:41

    Ah, the anticipation of what's next! :)

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  9. Jade Li27 February 2020 at 07:38

    I believe we throw energy out into the universe and if we are lucky the right recipients respond -- and vice versa. Well-developed story within the word limit.

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  10. Tannille27 February 2020 at 11:26

    Something cosmic going on. A great story to expand.

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  11. Ashlie Harris27 February 2020 at 12:07

    Lovely story here! I think it must be the lady in red behind him. 😉

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  12. Innerdialects.home.blog27 February 2020 at 14:00

    Law of attraction...? I dont know, but the Writer's Red lady it is, I think. 🙂

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  13. Penny Gadd27 February 2020 at 16:21

    I think it was the lady in red. What a wonderful shock it would have been for him! There certainly seem to be some meetings that are 'fated'. I've met people who became significant to me in one context, only to discover that I could have met them somewhere else earlier, or even in two other different places; and none of the contexts have been related; they're just 'coincidence'.

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  14. C. E. Ayr28 February 2020 at 02:28

    Charming tale

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  15. susanmehr@hotmail.com28 February 2020 at 16:23

    Well penned.

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  16. David Stewart29 February 2020 at 12:41

    Great story, Anita. :)

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  17. Linda29 February 2020 at 21:36

    Aww, I hope it continues to be a happy ending :)

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  18. Miranda Kate4 March 2020 at 03:30

    I liked the way you encompassed them both, well done.

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