Wednesday, 2 January 2019

Zapped

She was in love with him.
He was fair, tall and handsome.

Perhaps he loved her too.
He gazed at her and guarded her.
He was her zenith.
Pic Prompt: Russel Gayer
She liked to believe that they were compatible zodiac partners- her Water sign and his Earth sign would match perfectly.
She imagined flowing to him.

Sadly, the zigzag wire between them played spoilsport.

She felt zapped being the ‘possession’ of a different nation while he ‘belonged’ to a separate land.


The international border separating her (the river) and him (the mountain) had no clue that it was a villain in the love-story.

Do you feel borders can separate true love? Do share in the comments below.

100 Words short story
Linking with Friday Fictioneers 
& ABC Wednesday- Z for zapped, zenith, zodiac, zigzag
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20 comments:

  1. Neil MacDonald2 January 2019 at 20:24

    I've always believed the equator is a menagerie lion running round the middle of the world. I'm sure they taught me this when I first went to school

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  2. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields2 January 2019 at 20:57

    Dear Anita,

    Interesting use of the Z words. Some matches are just not meant to be no matter what the zodiac sign.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Iain Kelly2 January 2019 at 21:52

    Borders are never good for relationships.

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  4. carol l mckenna2 January 2019 at 21:55

    Great sample of Z words ~

    Happy Day to you,
    A ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. kalpana solsi2 January 2019 at 23:06

    The river and the mountain.... make a great story. In this case the river can change its course to meet the lover.
    great take on the prompt.

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  6. C. E. Ayr3 January 2019 at 03:27

    Clever analogy.
    Romeo and Juliet as nature's elements

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  7. Sandra Crook3 January 2019 at 15:13

    Cleverly done.

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  8. Roger Owen Green3 January 2019 at 20:32

    love those peaks!

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  9. brudberg3 January 2019 at 21:35

    Some borders cannot be crossed.

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  10. ABC-Wednesday3 January 2019 at 21:56

    lovestory without bounderies


    Have a splendid, ♥-warming ABC-Wednes-day / -week
    ♫ M e l d y ♪ (ABC-W-team)
    http://melodyk.nl/23-Z

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  11. Dale3 January 2019 at 22:18

    Interesting

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  12. Abhijit Ray4 January 2019 at 10:22

    We don't always get what we love. In this case, international border played spoil sport. Who knows somedays boundaries may be broken. They may decide to disobey international law by themselves. Times change.

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  13. Uppal4 January 2019 at 18:39

    Nice one!

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  14. Brenda Cox4 January 2019 at 19:05

    A very creative tale!

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  15. Linda6 January 2019 at 02:53

    Perhaps yes, perhaps no. Every story is different.

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  16. Haddock6 January 2019 at 05:35

    Nothing can separate true love.

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  17. Abhisek Nayak6 January 2019 at 14:24

    Good One.

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  18. Anshu Bhojnagarwala7 January 2019 at 16:21

    We know it all only too well sharing rivers with our neighbours! Good thought, Anita!

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  19. Gah Learner8 January 2019 at 18:31

    That's a clever use of z words. It depends on the border, I'd say. In 'normal, peacefully coexisting' countries, they won't separate lovers. In posessive, isolationist nations, they can, depending on how strong the fences are.

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  20. Ira8 January 2019 at 21:06

    Boundaries can separate physical entities but feelings are beyond borders...

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Your words mean a lot to me.

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