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Wednesday, 17 June 2015

The World Is A Small Place

He was hungry for riches, and thus "loved" an heiress, whom he wanted to marry.
PHOTO PROMPT - © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Photo-Prompt- Friday Fictioneers

When her marriage was fixed with a Prince, his plans came crashing.

He threatened to pull the trigger of his gun and kill her if she didn't marry him.

She refused.

He accidentally shot her.


She was dead.

Then, he escaped with her wealth.

He planned to settle abroad, in another part of the world, by adopting a new identity and a new life.

There he splurged her money.

He was driving the latest luxury car he had just bought when he received a phone-call on his mobile-phone.

The caller said, "Look who's seated next to you!"
Photo Prompt- Magpie Tales
"Why? I am driving solo!", he answered.

But, when he turned his head, he found her seated next to him...

CRASH!

“If you want to make God laugh, tell him about your plans.” 
 Woody Allen


Linking with-
Three Word Wednesday- Dead, Hungry, Threaten
ABC Wednesday- W for World, Wealth
Magpie Tales- Phone
Friday Fictioneers- Chandelier
Two Shoes In Texas- Crash
Blog-A-Rhythm- The World Is A Small Place
In Other Words-To make God laugh
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43 comments:

  1. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields17 June 2015 at 16:51

    Dear Anita,

    She got her revenge.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Vinay Leo R.17 June 2015 at 16:56

    Talk about killing two birds with one stone, you just killed 7 with one story :D

    Revenge is sweet, I guess.

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  3. Tarang Sinha17 June 2015 at 17:08

    Excellent take on the prompts!! :

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  4. Unknown17 June 2015 at 17:12

    Ooo-err - I didn't see that coming and neither did he!

    Rosey Pinkerton's blog

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  5. Jae Rose17 June 2015 at 17:46

    And your sins will find you out...this was a crashingly good story..

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  6. Anonymous17 June 2015 at 17:46

    Using a phone whilst driving: definite no no, even if it's a ghost.

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  7. Vishal Bheeroo17 June 2015 at 18:09

    A spooky tale that captures the attention with the pouring of emotions. She got her revenge and took him with her. Brilliant:)

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  8. Linda Kay17 June 2015 at 19:15

    A great story, Anita! So many emotions involved in it.

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  9. Keith's ramblings17 June 2015 at 19:29

    ...and that is why using a mobile when driving is illegal here! That outcome was worse than the £60 fine!

    Visit Keith's Ramblings!

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  10. Sandra Crook17 June 2015 at 20:10

    Comprehensively done.

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  11. Indrani17 June 2015 at 21:15

    Excellent Anita!
    Very well written.

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  12. Sheilagh Lee17 June 2015 at 21:16

    she got her revenge good for her

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  13. Josie Two Shoes17 June 2015 at 21:38

    I love that ending!!! This was a great story that once again proves that we never really get away with evil plans, even if we think we have for awhile. Thank you for writing for Two Shoes Tuesday! :-)

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  14. Reema D'souza17 June 2015 at 21:47

    Revenge complete! A nice take on all the prompts :)

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  15. Uppal17 June 2015 at 22:31

    Entertaining take on several prompts.

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  16. CookieCrumbsInc.17 June 2015 at 23:05

    Woah, that escalated quickly..

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  17. brudberg18 June 2015 at 00:24

    Revenge can be served beyond the grave.

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  18. Roger Owen Green18 June 2015 at 02:53

    Comeuppance!
    ROG, ABCW

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  19. Yolanda Renée18 June 2015 at 04:28

    Wonderful, a vengeful ghost. He got what he deserved!

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  20. elly stornebrink18 June 2015 at 06:07

    That's quite a story Anita and especially with all those prompts: I am SO impressed - WOW! ;) <3

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  21. Patricia18 June 2015 at 07:18

    Wow. this is a great story. Proves there are consequences to our actions. Sometimes unexpected and surprising ones. Thanks for linking to In Other Words...perfect for the prompt. I would say, yes, God is laughing.

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  22. sunaina sharma18 June 2015 at 08:04

    good one Anita.....:)

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  23. KParthasarathi18 June 2015 at 08:51

    Unexpected twist that served him right.Wonderful

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  24. Su-sieee! Mac18 June 2015 at 09:19

    Wowza! He deserved it.
    The View from the Top of the Ladder

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  25. Ls18 June 2015 at 11:13

    Anita, highly enjoyable story. Loved it.. and its quite fast paced too wishing you to reach the end faster..

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  26. Old Egg18 June 2015 at 11:50

    Tut, tut! Inattention when driving a fast car it happens every day. What economy in placing your written work on the web!

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  27. Soumya18 June 2015 at 12:12

    7 prompts in one?? Wow, no one but you could have done it :)

    The flow was beautiful and the story had the perfect ending!

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  28. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 13:00

    That must be some sort of record.

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  29. Kutamun18 June 2015 at 18:12

    "I see dead people " !

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  30. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 19:13

    That is one scary story.

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  31. Tina Basu18 June 2015 at 20:51

    Ghostly revenge.. great!

    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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  32. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 21:48

    Gee I hate when that happens! Great ghost-revenge story!

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  33. Anonymous19 June 2015 at 06:54

    Instant karma.

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  34. Anonymous19 June 2015 at 08:21

    What goes around comes around!

    Lily

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  35. Anil Sahu19 June 2015 at 08:26

    Dear Anita Ji, I really enjoyed this story and I think you have been writing very interesting stories too. Waiting for the new one.
    Hindi stories and articles

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  36. Deepa19 June 2015 at 15:26

    Too Good

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  37. Gemstone19 June 2015 at 16:12

    Great Story .. Waiting for More . :)

    Amit lamba

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  38. Ira19 June 2015 at 16:34

    Good take on the prompts!

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  39. Adi19 June 2015 at 23:29

    Wow, loved it!!
    She got her revenge!! Absolutely thrilling!! Loved it!

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  40. Gah Learner20 June 2015 at 06:26

    Brilliant and creepy. I guess that was her on the phone, too?

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  41. Unknown20 June 2015 at 20:41

    http://static1.squarespace.com/static/51eb2a9ee4b0ca62de57b02c/t/54ba9ef1e4b0f32f825eeab8/1421516530144/thumbs-up.png

    Tay.

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  42. Rat24 June 2015 at 04:13

    Impressive!! Anita, you rock weaving stories with all the prompts together :-)

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  43. Locomente1 July 2015 at 14:20

    This brought a shiver... Very nicely woven...

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