He was hungry for riches, and thus "loved" an heiress, whom he wanted to marry.
When her marriage was fixed with a Prince, his plans came crashing.
He threatened to pull the trigger of his gun and kill her if she didn't marry him.
She refused.
He accidentally shot her.
She was dead.
Then, he escaped with her wealth.
He planned to settle abroad, in another part of the world, by adopting a new identity and a new life.
There he splurged her money.
He was driving the latest luxury car he had just bought when he received a phone-call on his mobile-phone.
The caller said, "Look who's seated next to you!"
"Why? I am driving solo!", he answered.
But, when he turned his head, he found her seated next to him...
CRASH!
Linking with-
Three Word Wednesday- Dead, Hungry, Threaten
ABC Wednesday- W for World, Wealth
Magpie Tales- Phone
Friday Fictioneers- Chandelier
Two Shoes In Texas- Crash
Blog-A-Rhythm- The World Is A Small Place
In Other Words-To make God laugh
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| Photo-Prompt- Friday Fictioneers |
When her marriage was fixed with a Prince, his plans came crashing.
He threatened to pull the trigger of his gun and kill her if she didn't marry him.
She refused.
He accidentally shot her.
She was dead.
Then, he escaped with her wealth.
He planned to settle abroad, in another part of the world, by adopting a new identity and a new life.
There he splurged her money.
He was driving the latest luxury car he had just bought when he received a phone-call on his mobile-phone.
The caller said, "Look who's seated next to you!"
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| Photo Prompt- Magpie Tales |
But, when he turned his head, he found her seated next to him...
CRASH!
“If you want to make God laugh, tell him about your plans.”
Woody Allen
Woody Allen
Linking with-
Three Word Wednesday- Dead, Hungry, Threaten
ABC Wednesday- W for World, Wealth
Magpie Tales- Phone
Friday Fictioneers- Chandelier
Two Shoes In Texas- Crash
Blog-A-Rhythm- The World Is A Small Place
In Other Words-To make God laugh
Dear Anita,
ReplyDeleteShe got her revenge.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Talk about killing two birds with one stone, you just killed 7 with one story :D
ReplyDeleteRevenge is sweet, I guess.
Excellent take on the prompts!! :
ReplyDeleteOoo-err - I didn't see that coming and neither did he!
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And your sins will find you out...this was a crashingly good story..
ReplyDeleteUsing a phone whilst driving: definite no no, even if it's a ghost.
ReplyDeleteA spooky tale that captures the attention with the pouring of emotions. She got her revenge and took him with her. Brilliant:)
ReplyDeleteA great story, Anita! So many emotions involved in it.
ReplyDelete...and that is why using a mobile when driving is illegal here! That outcome was worse than the £60 fine!
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Comprehensively done.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Anita!
ReplyDeleteVery well written.
she got her revenge good for her
ReplyDeleteI love that ending!!! This was a great story that once again proves that we never really get away with evil plans, even if we think we have for awhile. Thank you for writing for Two Shoes Tuesday! :-)
ReplyDeleteRevenge complete! A nice take on all the prompts :)
ReplyDeleteEntertaining take on several prompts.
ReplyDeleteWoah, that escalated quickly..
ReplyDeleteRevenge can be served beyond the grave.
ReplyDeleteComeuppance!
ReplyDeleteROG, ABCW
Wonderful, a vengeful ghost. He got what he deserved!
ReplyDeleteThat's quite a story Anita and especially with all those prompts: I am SO impressed - WOW! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteWow. this is a great story. Proves there are consequences to our actions. Sometimes unexpected and surprising ones. Thanks for linking to In Other Words...perfect for the prompt. I would say, yes, God is laughing.
ReplyDeletegood one Anita.....:)
ReplyDeleteUnexpected twist that served him right.Wonderful
ReplyDeleteWowza! He deserved it.
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Anita, highly enjoyable story. Loved it.. and its quite fast paced too wishing you to reach the end faster..
ReplyDeleteTut, tut! Inattention when driving a fast car it happens every day. What economy in placing your written work on the web!
ReplyDelete7 prompts in one?? Wow, no one but you could have done it :)
ReplyDeleteThe flow was beautiful and the story had the perfect ending!
That must be some sort of record.
ReplyDelete"I see dead people " !
ReplyDeleteThat is one scary story.
ReplyDeleteGhostly revenge.. great!
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Gee I hate when that happens! Great ghost-revenge story!
ReplyDeleteInstant karma.
ReplyDeleteWhat goes around comes around!
ReplyDeleteLily
Dear Anita Ji, I really enjoyed this story and I think you have been writing very interesting stories too. Waiting for the new one.
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Too Good
ReplyDeleteGreat Story .. Waiting for More . :)
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Good take on the prompts!
ReplyDeleteWow, loved it!!
ReplyDeleteShe got her revenge!! Absolutely thrilling!! Loved it!
Brilliant and creepy. I guess that was her on the phone, too?
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ReplyDeleteTay.
Impressive!! Anita, you rock weaving stories with all the prompts together :-)
ReplyDeleteThis brought a shiver... Very nicely woven...
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