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Sunday, 8 February 2015

Dream To Journey With You!

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 51; the fifty-first edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with Red Ink Publishers and "Curse Of The Red Soil" by Durgesh Shastri. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

Like two planets-
Passengers in transit,
We both journey,
In our own orbit.

At times our eyes meet...
To be together, we are fit.
I often see you in my dreams,
We make a couple super-hit!

I wanna say a million things.
Plan to send a note or chit!
Ready to rekindle,
Passion bit by bit.

Magic of touch & care,
Love-lights waiting to be lit...
Will it be possible-
That our paths meet?

I dream of colliding,
And to get you to greet...
If you too wanna Live, Laugh, Love,
To your feelings, don't cheat!

Hope like me you also dream-
To beside me take the seat?
To take my hand in yours?
Whisper words sweet?

You & I share the same dreams!
Let's together enjoy life's treat!
Life beckons us to journey!
Experience our chemistry's heat!

Share & fulfill dreams together!
Marriage is a two-way street!
Like me, if you too dream & believe,
We'll enjoy the journey every minute!

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Happy Valentine's Day in advance to all of you!
I'm loving the Blogging journey, aren't you?

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54 comments:

  1. Brian Miller8 February 2015 at 01:18

    smiles...there is some fun anticipation in this one...
    the desire to collide and meet....and perhaps you will get
    just that opportunity...

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    1. Anita Sabat8 February 2015 at 01:34

      Thanks Brian :) I have got my opportunity already as I'm married!
      I have written this poem from the point of view of those silent souls, who never express their love though they dream to greet! Valentine's Day should be their opportunity! :)

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  2. Linda Kay8 February 2015 at 02:24

    I smiled when I read this post, Anita. My latest novel addresses puppy love and how two people find each other later in life. Fun poem.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 February 2015 at 09:50

      So glad that you smiled, Linda :)
      Puppy love is interesting! Would love to read your novel.

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  3. Gail8 February 2015 at 02:54

    Thanks for coming by to visit.

    Nice poem.

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  4. Saru Singhal8 February 2015 at 05:20

    Joy of companionship, beautiful poem Anita.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 February 2015 at 09:55

      Indeed the joy & beauty of companionship!
      Thanks Saru :)

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  5. Gabriella8 February 2015 at 06:14

    You have described the best journey of all!

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    1. Anita Sabat8 February 2015 at 09:59

      We love such journeys of love, Gabriella :)

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  6. Peggy8 February 2015 at 06:18

    Lovely story here! A wonderful journey. thanks for visiting my blog as well.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 February 2015 at 10:12

      Thanks for visiting & reading, Peggy :) Delighted that you liked it!

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  7. Mary8 February 2015 at 08:11

    It is always wonderful when two journeys intersect & then the two can journey on together. That is the best life can offer. You expressed it so very well.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 February 2015 at 10:14

      Yes. Then two different planets can join together & journey in one orbit :)
      Thanks for your appreciation, Mary!

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  8. rudraprayaga8 February 2015 at 12:15

    Dream have dreamily explained here with lines of dream,Anita.Lovely really.

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  9. Ajay Pai8 February 2015 at 13:23

    Oh, a coolest one! Who would be that, hopefully not an Alien! To tie the knot? Then definitely not an alien!
    Loved the narrative.

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 15:29

      Definitely not the PK influence :)
      Jadoo can happen on Earth too :) 'Planets' in the poem is just a term for our personal space :)
      Glad you liked it!

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  10. aativas8 February 2015 at 16:35

    Liked this Dream!

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 15:30

      Some dreams are with our eyes open :) Thanks :)

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  11. KParthasarathi8 February 2015 at 21:57

    Topical post to help the timid,hesitant and slow to express their feelings

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 15:31

      People don't express their feelings.
      Even the married ones :)

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  12. Margaret8 February 2015 at 22:14

    Sweet. Very sweet.

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  13. Wendy Bourke9 February 2015 at 05:20

    This is awesome. You've whimsically articulated the "fun" of companionship. That simple truth, often seems to get lost in the day to day. Very nice.

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 15:33

      We are too busy or scared to express or articulate our feelings. Nice when we share the truth and the fun :)
      Thanks for sharing your views & your appreciation :)

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  14. Someone is Special9 February 2015 at 13:53

    If it is mutual, it will be a sweet dream. Sweet! All the best for BAT!

    Someone is Special

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 15:37

      Yes, mutual agreement/love/dream is important, Sarav :)
      Thanks for your wishes :)

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  15. Vinay Leo R.9 February 2015 at 15:55

    How beautiful and simple :) I hope he views it the same too :D

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 17:22

      Thanks for stopping by & reading, Vinay!
      Yes, that's an important point. Else, it'll be one-way-street & one-sided love...

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  16. Vikas Khair9 February 2015 at 20:53

    Lovely Poem Anita. Very well written.

    Vikas Khair - Dreamer

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    1. Anita Sabat9 February 2015 at 22:47

      Welcome here, Vikas :) Thanks for your nice words!

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  17. Unknown9 February 2015 at 23:57

    Like me if you too dream... yes, to stay happily together both of the two must have the same dream. A dream to love and get loved. I loved the concept. :) All the best, Anita.

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    1. Anita Sabat20 February 2015 at 08:29

      Very true, Namrata. A common dream means happiness :)
      Thanks for your nice words.

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  18. Unknown10 February 2015 at 00:45

    Lovely lines, Anita. Your poem reaffirms that the two who share the same dreams, will definitely meet along the journey somewhere.

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    1. Anita Sabat20 February 2015 at 08:31

      Thanks for your maiden comment here on my blog, Priya!
      Yes, hope this is true! Many times people sacrifice dreams to meet :)

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  19. MeenalSonal10 February 2015 at 15:19

    Hope the two souls orbit in the similar path called LOVE.

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  20. Anonymous10 February 2015 at 23:42

    Lovely lines, and some cute phrases in there! :)

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    1. Anita Sabat20 February 2015 at 08:42

      Thanks for reading & for your appreciation :)

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  21. vanderloost11 February 2015 at 10:53

    Nice lines

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  22. Cifar11 February 2015 at 11:22

    that's a wonderful love poem, I like the rhythm in it,

    My Blogaton Entry It Was Just A Dream

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  23. the factfiction11 February 2015 at 14:01

    It is beautiful...beautiful thought and beautifully penned down

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  24. Megha11 February 2015 at 23:43

    Nice and cuddling sweet.. :) My best wishes for BATOM

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  25. SB12 February 2015 at 22:04

    Lovely poem..good luck !

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  26. sulaiman sait14 February 2015 at 00:55

    A wonderful journey and a wonderful poem...
    ATB for BAT

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    1. Anita Sabat20 February 2015 at 08:47

      Thanks Sulaiman! Delighted that you liked it:)

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  27. Anonymous13 July 2015 at 20:57

    Wondering how I missed this beautiful and soulful poem about love, Anita:)

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    1. Anita Sabat14 July 2015 at 11:07

      Thanks for stopping by & reading, Vishal :) Glad you liked it!

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