Monday, 19 January 2015

Proper



When he went away wordlessly,
she wondered that morning earnestly-
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Why did he ignore?
No word/kiss at the door?
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Photo Prompt- Permission from Magpie Tales

She wished things were proper,
Wives deserve their husbands’ best-behavior!
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He came! Imagine her surprise!
His wordless kiss was nice!



Linking with-
Two Shoes Tuesday- Proper 
Magpie Tales
dVerse Poets- 10 words

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25 comments:

  1. Aayesha S Hakim19 January 2015 at 15:28

    Omg, such a sweet post, Anita :)

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  2. Rajlakshmi19 January 2015 at 16:38

    aww that is so sweet :) beautiful write

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    1. Anita Sabat19 January 2015 at 16:48

      Thanks for reading & for your appreciation, Rajlakshmi :)

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  3. Bikram19 January 2015 at 18:24

    :) love is in the airrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :) very romantic

    Bikram's

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    1. Anita Sabat19 January 2015 at 20:23

      Yes, Bikram! The pic gets the credit :)
      V Day is less than a month away :)

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  4. Rahul Bhatia19 January 2015 at 18:51

    Sweet:)

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  5. Uppal19 January 2015 at 20:12

    like the romantic atmosphere which you could create effortlessly!

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  6. Brian Miller19 January 2015 at 20:25

    heh. me thinks he was setting up the surprise of coming home early...

    and even though you missed the link at dverse,
    i bet if you visit some of the others they will find yours....

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    1. Anita Sabat19 January 2015 at 20:27

      Nice when we have nice surprises, Brian! :)

      Thanks for the tip :)

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    2. Ajay Pai26 January 2015 at 19:41

      haha! Brian Miller!

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  7. the critics20 January 2015 at 06:45

    nice .... and lovely

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  8. Silent Otto 20 January 2015 at 19:14

    He was off to buy the ring ! ....( for the other girl)

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  9. The Blog of Bee20 January 2015 at 21:54

    Sometimes ladies jump to conclusions that can so unnecessarily torture them. Perfect writing.

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  10. Kathe W.21 January 2015 at 01:07

    very sweet- she should have been a bit more patient!

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  11. Sindhu Devi K21 January 2015 at 13:19

    How romantic! How sweet! We all love to be loved and surprised right?

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  12. Josie Two Shoes21 January 2015 at 20:22

    This was lovely! I like that he returned to kiss her. We need to take time to show the people we love that we are thinking of them and they are important to us. Love needs to be nurtured if I is to say "proper" and strong! :-)

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  13. Unknown21 January 2015 at 22:28

    Such a sweet verse! :)
    Enjoyed reading it :)

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  14. Anonymous21 January 2015 at 23:12

    lovely!

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  15. Shivani Singh22 January 2015 at 20:23

    By God i can identify with this...has happened so many times...beautiful Anita. Really so well composed and explains so much. God Bless :) :) :)

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  16. Tess Kincaid23 January 2015 at 04:04

    There is no such thing as proper...

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  17. Ankita 23 January 2015 at 16:29

    lovely little take on the pic prompt!

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  18. Patricia24 January 2015 at 08:39

    Sounds like a new bride speaking. Like the happy ending.

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Your words mean a lot to me.

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