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Thursday, 25 December 2014

She Walked That Path



She had visited many lands & had travelled to the world’s edge.
She had lost a lot & had quit material objects in pursuit of knowledge.

The brilliant light of enlightenment was her joy, desire, aim & plan.
People warned- “Don’t even try walking that path! You’re a woman!”
PHOTO PROMPT - Copyright -Björn Rudberg
PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright -Björn Rudberg


She still climbed up the stairs & followed her lofty dreams fervently.
She devotedly conquered the insurmountable & attained her aim ultimately.

When she walked down the same path as a winner, the same people recognized her.
Today, people follow her footsteps, are thoughtful listening to her attentively & feel better…



100 Words Story-Poem :
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Three Word Wednesday- Brilliant, Fervent, Thoughtful

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23 comments:

  1. Nikhil Chaudhari25 December 2014 at 22:04

    Awesome post once again!!

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  2. Ajay Pai25 December 2014 at 22:09

    short , sweet and thought provking.

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  3. Anonymous26 December 2014 at 02:23

    interesting words!

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  4. brudberg26 December 2014 at 03:28

    Good combination of words...

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  5. Pooja Mahimkar26 December 2014 at 10:22

    very inspiring

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  6. Red Handed26 December 2014 at 11:54

    People always stop people from doing what they didn't have the guts to do. brilliant

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  7. i b arora26 December 2014 at 13:30

    interesting and inspiring

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  8. kalpana solsi26 December 2014 at 18:02

    She is a pioneer.

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  9. kaykuala26 December 2014 at 18:47

    A trail blazer to emulate obviously. Nicely Anita!

    Hank

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  10. Ls26 December 2014 at 18:56

    Loved this Anita.. good one! using the steps as climbing up success is very nice.

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  11. Anonymous26 December 2014 at 19:04

    Power packed.

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  12. Linda Kay26 December 2014 at 19:31

    Lots of emotion in a short poem. Nice job.

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  13. Sindhu Devi K26 December 2014 at 22:31

    An inspiring poem Anita :) Every woman faces similar obstacles but only a few dare to swim against the stream. When they succeed they become inspiration for all just as this sweet poem... :)

    TC! Keep smiling :)

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  14. Anonymous26 December 2014 at 22:34

    Brilliant and inspiring. Such emotional journeys of believing in the self brings out not only the best but makes victory tasty as the same world revisit their copy.

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  15. Anonymous26 December 2014 at 23:13

    Way to elevate the image. :)

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  16. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields27 December 2014 at 18:30

    Dear Anita,

    This was brilliant, fervent and thoughtful.

    Shalom and Happy New Year,

    Rochelle

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  17. indu chhibber27 December 2014 at 18:41

    Your story? :))))))

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  18. Saru Singhal27 December 2014 at 20:42

    I can relate to many things in the poem. Very beautiful.

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  19. Amrita Sabat28 December 2014 at 13:11

    Excellent story poem! :)

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  20. liz young28 December 2014 at 22:20

    If anyone told me I couldn't do something because I'm a woman, I'd work harder too!

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  21. Cifar30 December 2014 at 13:59

    excellent ,the world need such fearless women

    He Is Coming to Town

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  22. Ann (bunnygirl)2 January 2015 at 09:52

    People always want to hold you back until you succeed, and then they all want to bask in your glow.

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  23. Whispering Thoughts3 January 2015 at 07:45

    Very thoughtful write up

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Your words mean a lot to me.