She had visited many lands & had travelled to the world’s edge.
She had lost a lot & had quit material objects in pursuit of knowledge.
The brilliant light of enlightenment was her joy, desire, aim & plan.
People warned- “Don’t even try walking that path! You’re a woman!”
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| PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright -Björn Rudberg |
She still climbed up the stairs & followed her lofty dreams fervently.
She devotedly conquered the insurmountable & attained her aim ultimately.
When she walked down the same path as a winner, the same people recognized her.
Today, people follow her footsteps, are thoughtful listening to her attentively & feel better…
100 Words Story-Poem :
Friday Fictioneers
Three Word Wednesday- Brilliant, Fervent, Thoughtful
Awesome post once again!!
ReplyDeleteshort , sweet and thought provking.
ReplyDeleteinteresting words!
ReplyDeleteGood combination of words...
ReplyDeletevery inspiring
ReplyDeletePeople always stop people from doing what they didn't have the guts to do. brilliant
ReplyDeleteinteresting and inspiring
ReplyDeleteShe is a pioneer.
ReplyDeleteA trail blazer to emulate obviously. Nicely Anita!
ReplyDeleteHank
Loved this Anita.. good one! using the steps as climbing up success is very nice.
ReplyDeletePower packed.
ReplyDeleteLots of emotion in a short poem. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteAn inspiring poem Anita :) Every woman faces similar obstacles but only a few dare to swim against the stream. When they succeed they become inspiration for all just as this sweet poem... :)
ReplyDeleteTC! Keep smiling :)
Brilliant and inspiring. Such emotional journeys of believing in the self brings out not only the best but makes victory tasty as the same world revisit their copy.
ReplyDeleteWay to elevate the image. :)
ReplyDeleteDear Anita,
ReplyDeleteThis was brilliant, fervent and thoughtful.
Shalom and Happy New Year,
Rochelle
Your story? :))))))
ReplyDeleteI can relate to many things in the poem. Very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteExcellent story poem! :)
ReplyDeleteIf anyone told me I couldn't do something because I'm a woman, I'd work harder too!
ReplyDeleteexcellent ,the world need such fearless women
ReplyDeleteHe Is Coming to Town
People always want to hold you back until you succeed, and then they all want to bask in your glow.
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful write up
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