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Thursday, 6 November 2014

She Danced



She danced wonderfully as she danced from her heart.

She rehearsed sincerely & that set her apart...

She earned praise, medals, awards & many a trophy.

All this was also accompanied by cartloads of envy.


Though they taunted her, a bright future she did chart!


45 Words Poem

Linking it to-
Two Shoes Tuesday #103 - Dance

 Five Sentence Fiction - Envy



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26 comments:

  1. Sumit@sellall6 November 2014 at 22:57

    Great Lines, Dance which is called a way to say something to a people. Great Work, Thanks for sharing this.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:11

      Thanks for stopping by & reading & for your nice words :)

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  2. K R Smith6 November 2014 at 23:31

    Interesting rhyme scheme! Like a limerick (although it's not).

    Always good to have another poet participate in FSF challenges.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:12

      Thanks a lot for visiting & sharing your valuable comment.
      I have used the rhyming-scheme of Limerick. Need to read about it in greater detail :)

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  3. Ankita 6 November 2014 at 23:42

    nice one! envy is always earned :D

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  4. Anonymous7 November 2014 at 04:41

    Nice - hard work and achievement brings, results - but also brings envy.
    Cheers
    KT

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:14

      Thanks for stopping by. Yes, that's the truth...

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  5. MeenalSonal7 November 2014 at 15:20

    Excellent! Success always creates envy among others unknowingly.

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:17

      That's unfortunate, but true :)
      Thanks for reading & for your appreciation :)

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  6. Anmol Rawat7 November 2014 at 16:29

    Nice !
    M sure people envy you as you post for several prompts in one ;)

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:18

      That's sweet, Anmol! Thanks :)
      More than the envy, nice to earn good wishes :)
      Best wishes!

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  7. Unknown7 November 2014 at 20:12

    Interesting. Loved it! :)

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  8. Vinitha8 November 2014 at 00:29

    Good one Anita. :)

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  9. Unknown8 November 2014 at 02:58

    Some people have that attitude dominating than the rest of the good qualities that they have... but what will that do to your dancer, she relies on her hardwork, na?? Good one, anita!

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:22

      True. Nice that the dancer depends on her own hard-work.
      Thanks Priya :)

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  10. Ranu 8028 November 2014 at 03:00

    It's a wonderful poem.

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  11. Josie Two Shoes8 November 2014 at 07:32

    I love this Anita, we can see that your dancer reaped the rewards of her dedication and hard practice. I love that she danced from her heart, anything done from the heart is bound to be rewarding, and yes, there will always be those who envy. This is because they admire achievement but are unwilling to put in the effort themselves. Great poem, I loved it!

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:26

      Delighted that you liked it! Thanks for sharing your wonderful words & appreciation, Josie :)

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  12. Anonymous8 November 2014 at 13:52

    Brilliant fiction. A tale of triumph and perseverance. The heart never lies as beautifully penned, Anita:)

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    1. Anita Sabat8 November 2014 at 23:28

      Thanks Vishal!
      Am sure this is reality too for some people...

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  13. Unknown29 November 2014 at 22:31

    Interesting rhyme! :)
    Lovely!

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Your words mean a lot to me.