She danced wonderfully as she danced from her heart.
She rehearsed sincerely & that set her apart...
She earned praise, medals, awards & many a trophy.
All this was also accompanied by cartloads of envy.
Though they taunted her, a bright future she did chart!
45 Words Poem
Linking it to-
Two Shoes Tuesday #103 - Dance
Five Sentence Fiction - Envy
Great Lines, Dance which is called a way to say something to a people. Great Work, Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by & reading & for your nice words :)
DeleteInteresting rhyme scheme! Like a limerick (although it's not).
ReplyDeleteAlways good to have another poet participate in FSF challenges.
Thanks a lot for visiting & sharing your valuable comment.
DeleteI have used the rhyming-scheme of Limerick. Need to read about it in greater detail :)
nice one! envy is always earned :D
ReplyDeleteThanks! Wish we could sell/exchange envy :)
DeleteNice - hard work and achievement brings, results - but also brings envy.
ReplyDeleteCheers
KT
Thanks for stopping by. Yes, that's the truth...
DeleteExcellent! Success always creates envy among others unknowingly.
ReplyDeleteThat's unfortunate, but true :)
DeleteThanks for reading & for your appreciation :)
Nice !
ReplyDeleteM sure people envy you as you post for several prompts in one ;)
That's sweet, Anmol! Thanks :)
DeleteMore than the envy, nice to earn good wishes :)
Best wishes!
Interesting. Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :) Glad you liked it, Ramya
DeleteGood one Anita. :)
ReplyDeleteDelighted you liked it, Vinitha :)
DeleteSome people have that attitude dominating than the rest of the good qualities that they have... but what will that do to your dancer, she relies on her hardwork, na?? Good one, anita!
ReplyDeleteTrue. Nice that the dancer depends on her own hard-work.
DeleteThanks Priya :)
It's a wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ranu :)
DeleteI love this Anita, we can see that your dancer reaped the rewards of her dedication and hard practice. I love that she danced from her heart, anything done from the heart is bound to be rewarding, and yes, there will always be those who envy. This is because they admire achievement but are unwilling to put in the effort themselves. Great poem, I loved it!
ReplyDeleteDelighted that you liked it! Thanks for sharing your wonderful words & appreciation, Josie :)
DeleteBrilliant fiction. A tale of triumph and perseverance. The heart never lies as beautifully penned, Anita:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal!
DeleteAm sure this is reality too for some people...
Interesting rhyme! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely!
Thanks for your appreciation, Daneshwari :)
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