Saturday, 29 November 2014

How To...

He was strolling in the lawn of his hotel,
When he saw the pretty girl on her cycle.

How to win over her love & her heart?
He thought & followed, hit by Cupid’s dart.

She entered a library and so did he.
How to catch her eye? Act crazy?
PHOTO PROMPT - Copyright - Randy Mazie
PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright – Randy Mazie


Stuffing books, she tried to balance, 
How to use the chance to earn her glance?

He went & dashed; books were strewn over lawn.
To help her, appeared a handsome man-

Her boyfriend; soon to be a part of her family!
How to forget love & make a retreat hastily?


100 Words Story-Poem.

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BYG Adventures-I Feel Like Stuffing
Poetry Jam- How To
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IndiSpire Edition#41 - Love. Weave a story. #Love





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55 comments:

  1. Raj30 November 2014 at 00:18

    Love Indeed springs quite a few surprises....

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  2. Gabriella30 November 2014 at 00:19

    This is both sweet and funny, Anita! Your poem made me smile. The poor man must have felt a right idiot.

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:20

      Thanks Gabriella!
      Glad to be the reason of your smile :) :)

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  3. Mary30 November 2014 at 00:31

    Well this really made me smile today.....especially that hasty retreat!

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:22

      True Mary!
      Glad to have made you smile, Mary :) :)

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  4. Brian Miller30 November 2014 at 07:48

    haha. keep trying
    you may just find love yet
    if you keep putting yourself out there.

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  5. Carraol30 November 2014 at 09:39

    Great mix of words and picture!

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:24

      Delighted you liked it :)
      The prompts inspired :)

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  6. Pooja Mahimkar30 November 2014 at 10:01

    haha.. the weird things that happen to us :D

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  7. Sumana Roy30 November 2014 at 11:47

    aww...the man has to take another chance at another place...really...thanks for the smile Anita :)

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:25

      Yes Sumanaji!
      So happy that you smiled because of my poem :) Keep smiling!

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  8. Romi30 November 2014 at 12:47

    I enjoyed reading your lovely poem.

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  9. debajyoti30 November 2014 at 19:01

    Very nicely done! i like everything that you write here. guess, this is a contest because i saw this image on other blogs as well. All the best! Win it :)

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:28

      Thanks a lot, Deb :)
      No, not a contest. Written in response to the weekly writing-prompts that many all over the world happily contribute to!
      Best wishes to you!

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  10. Saru Singhal30 November 2014 at 22:03

    Hahaha... I feel sorry for the boy. Nice poem.

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:30

      You are so kind & warm , Saru :)
      Don't feel sorry. I'm sure God has kept someone nice for the boy :)
      Thanks!

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    2. Saru Singhal2 December 2014 at 22:12

      Hehhehe...

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    3. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 23:07

      DTPH movie dialog- "Someone somewhere is there for you" :)

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  11. Anonymous30 November 2014 at 22:39

    Poor boy! Nice one, Anita.

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:32

      You too are an empathetic soul, Charuhas :)
      Everything happens for the best :) The boy will be all right!
      Thanks :)

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  12. MeenalSonal1 December 2014 at 12:06

    Soo cute, hope the girl at least gave a single glance :)

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    1. Anita Sabat1 December 2014 at 12:34

      Thanks MeenalSonal :)
      Must have given a glance to find out who the person was who dashed against her on the lawn!

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  13. Anonymous1 December 2014 at 13:32

    Dear Anita, Wonderful and entertaining poem. Great idea too! Enjoyable! Nan :)

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    1. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 11:04

      Thanks for reading & for your wonderful words, Nan :)

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  14. Shailaja V1 December 2014 at 17:05

    Ah, how tragic for him! Well woven poem and using so many prompts too!

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    1. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 11:05

      Truly sorry for people who have to face such incidents :)
      Thanks a lot, Shailaja :)

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  15. Donna Smith1 December 2014 at 21:58

    Thanks for sharing your words.

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  16. Renu Vyas2 December 2014 at 12:02

    A hasty retreat..haha..loved it ! :)

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  17. Rachna2 December 2014 at 12:04

    haha I guess love is around another corner. :)

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  18. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 12:07

    Thanks Alok :)

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  19. Unknown2 December 2014 at 14:35

    awwwww poor guy, well is he still available lol. Superb soul-sis :)

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    1. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 18:53

      Thanks for your appreciation, Soul-sis :)
      Hope we are not in such situations :)

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  20. brudberg2 December 2014 at 17:00

    Alas it not always easy.. I would go back and try with that poor librarian :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 18:55

      Thanks for reading & commenting, Bjorn :)
      Best wishes ;)

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  21. www.lifepartneracademy.com2 December 2014 at 18:05

    Nice poem. Looks like the hero is straight from a bollywood movie.

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    1. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 18:58

      Thanks :) Had the hero been from a Bollywood movie, he would have impressed the girl at first sight or 'pehli nazar' :)

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  22. Anonymous2 December 2014 at 18:24

    Nice one; things happen so quickly :D :)

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  23. jkalwaye2 December 2014 at 20:11

    poetry is life .I was about to drop my efforts to compose poem .Telling a story ,if it is in the form of poetry ,many says ,no no that is not poetry.this poem inspire me to carry on .whatever me wanna to say .I still remember your fairy tale with a great climax .yeah i have a sharp memory .God bless you .jk

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    1. Anita Sabat2 December 2014 at 23:03

      Thank you so much for stopping by & sharing such nice words :)
      Please do continue to write! So delighted to be a source of inspiration. And yes, we can express in our style :)
      Do keep visiting. You inspire too!
      Be blessed!

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  24. Maniparna2 December 2014 at 21:37

    Nicely done and weaving so many prompts together definitely is an act of great applause... :-)

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  25. Anonymous3 December 2014 at 10:16

    This is so sweet. :)

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    1. Anita Sabat7 December 2014 at 00:14

      Thanks for stopping by & reading :)
      Glad you liked it!

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  26. Unknown3 December 2014 at 10:32

    Lol! Aww, bechara!

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  27. Indrani4 December 2014 at 09:12

    Better luck next time for him. :)

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