Saturday, 11 October 2014

On The Beach

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Happiness on the beach for Mr.Bakshi!
He ogled at a pretty lady in a bikini sexy!
mario miranda mug
Photo-Prompt- The Moving Quill

Mrs.Bakshi, who was wet, was wild seeing this.
Hubby staring at another woman is no bliss...

Their little boy was unaware of any tension!
For him, on the beach meant happiness & fun!

(49 Words)


Linking this to the Fiction Challenge ‘From 15 to 50′

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38 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 October 2014 at 02:53

    Loove it, Anita. Last line was what happiness is all about:)

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    1. Anita Sabat11 October 2014 at 07:22

      Thanks Vishal :)
      Happiness is the absence of tension or what we dislike :)

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  2. Hardi11 October 2014 at 05:55

    Haha this was humorous in the way it was presented :) But it's really a common story..unfortunately!

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    1. Anita Sabat11 October 2014 at 07:24

      Thanks for stopping by.
      Yes, this is true & happens everywhere!
      I remember seeing a pic in the newspaper of the world leaders- Obama & Sarkozy staring at a lady in a World-Meet!

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  3. Beloo Mehra11 October 2014 at 11:09

    Happiness is relative, as they say ;)
    Nice try, Anita!

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    1. Anita Sabat11 October 2014 at 11:16

      Thanks Beloo :)
      Yes, it depends on the perspective!
      Happiness like riches is relative!
      The more the happiness or the riches, the more the relatives :)

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  4. K.A. Acharya11 October 2014 at 14:48

    A nice story describing happiness as it changes with perspective. Good one, Anita.
    Cheers!

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    1. Anita Sabat11 October 2014 at 15:14

      Thanks Kiran!
      Happiness for one, isn't happiness for another :)

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  5. Shilpa Gupte11 October 2014 at 14:54

    That was lovelyyyyyy! Enjoyed it! :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat11 October 2014 at 15:15

      Thanks Shilpa. Delighted that your enjoyed reading this :)

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  6. Unknown11 October 2014 at 17:22

    My father (RIP) was always faithful to my mother, but he did tend to have roving eyeballs. I once told her I would smack any man who did that! In the long run, that would have been mild. My (now ex) husband was emotionally abusive.

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    1. Anita Sabat11 October 2014 at 18:03

      Thanks for sharing your experience, Ursula.
      Yes, men do have roving eyes... This habit can hurt their wives mentally & emotionally, especially if they are sensitive...

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  7. Anonymous11 October 2014 at 23:35

    haha! Hilarious Anita

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  8. Anita Sabat13 October 2014 at 18:04

    Thanks Ashwini :)

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  9. Sindhu Devi K15 October 2014 at 15:31

    So funny! So true in the case of most of the families... It's a cute mug which you have showed us :)
    TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Anita Sabat25 October 2014 at 11:31

      True Sindhu.
      Even I love the cup. It's Shailaja's picture prompt :)
      Keep smiling :)

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  10. Shailaja V29 November 2014 at 21:45

    This is so adorable! I love the multiple perspectives you brought in, in just 50 words! Well done :D

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    1. Anita Sabat30 November 2014 at 11:39

      Thanks for your appreciation & for choosing me as the winner for the October edition of #15to50, Shailaja :)
      Delighted with my maiden win :)

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  11. Anonymous30 November 2014 at 13:47

    Cutely humorous ...!!! :)

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  12. Indrani11 December 2014 at 09:08

    :D Indeed very funny. :)

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  13. Amit Agarwal10 August 2015 at 15:21

    Wow! Anita, :):D Very nice! Poor Mr. Bakshi:)

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  14. sunaina sharma10 August 2015 at 16:10

    What an apt warning you put Anita....ROFL....:)

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  15. Ravish Mani10 August 2015 at 16:23

    Anita, it's short, crispy & profound. It reminds me of Jesus' quote: "I tell you the truth, unless you change and become like little children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven."

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  16. RioZee10 August 2015 at 17:20

    Short and sleek, poor mr. Bakshi

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  17. Unknown10 August 2015 at 18:48

    nice one, Anita :-)

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  18. Unknown10 August 2015 at 20:29

    Haha ..that's a cool one Anita, and the story is pretty realistic. ;)

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  19. Kalpana10 August 2015 at 20:40

    Well done Anita! I don't feel sorry for Mr Bakshi at all as I think he was behaving really badly. Poor Mrs. Bakshi.

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  20. Kokila gupta10 August 2015 at 21:02

    O God ! Poor Mr Bakshi !! Nice one Anita :)

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  21. Arti10 August 2015 at 21:10

    Hahaha, this was amusing Anita, god bless the little boy - may he always be happy like this!

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  22. Unknown11 August 2015 at 00:24

    Hilarious it is! :-D So beautifully presented!

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  23. Unknown11 August 2015 at 00:53

    ha ha ha ... Good one ..

    http://thetalesofatraveler.com/2015/08/08/day-trip-from-bangalore-to-kotilingeshwara-temple/

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  24. Maniparna11 August 2015 at 08:55

    Hehe..we often meet men like Mr Bakshi on the beach... :-D

    The last line is what happiness is all about.... :-)

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  25. Ashish Kumar11 August 2015 at 19:19

    very nice... the last line perfectly describes happiness.. :-)

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  26. Unknown12 August 2015 at 13:06

    Uff! This Mr. Bakshi!

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  27. Nima Das18 August 2015 at 13:53

    hahaha this was fun to read!

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