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Sunday, 17 August 2014

Reunion



He loved her & even she was his lover.
Their love was scorned by those in power.

No union as in their stars there was fault.
They were killed, but their love wouldn’t halt.
COPYRIGHT: Shailaja V/ The Moving Quill
COPYRIGHT: Shailaja V/ The Moving Quill
He was the butterfly, she was the flower.
Reunion, at long last, at that dawn hour…


Linking this to the Fiction Challenge ‘From 15 to 50′


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40 comments:

  1. Aathira17 August 2014 at 14:50

    Lovely! A lot said in few words, Anita :)

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  2. Anonymous17 August 2014 at 17:19

    Dear Anita,

    Such a wealth of emotions you've captured! I especially like the conclusion, filled with sadness and pathos.

    Thanks for linking up:)

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    1. Anita Sabat17 August 2014 at 21:30

      Thanks Shailaja for the initiative. My pleasure to link up :)

      That they were killed is sad. But, I felt the ending is happy as the lovers had a reunion.

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  3. Anonymous17 August 2014 at 18:48

    Divine justice. You've injected a right does of emotions, love and longing. Pure bliss:)

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    1. Anita Sabat17 August 2014 at 21:31

      Glad you liked it, Vishal. Thanks for your nice words :)

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  4. Unknown17 August 2014 at 19:10

    Sad and romantic. I enjoyed your poem.

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  5. Ankur Anand17 August 2014 at 20:12

    :( .. few words lots of emotions :)

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  6. Arpita Dash17 August 2014 at 20:49

    Nice Anita....your perception about this prompt made me amazed.

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    1. Anita Sabat17 August 2014 at 21:34

      Thanks Arpita. You can contribute for it too. Do link up :)

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  7. Abhishek18 August 2014 at 00:25

    Lot of emotions in few lines..:)...

    Feel free to comment on my blogs too

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    1. Anita Sabat18 August 2014 at 11:51

      Thanks for stopping by & sharing, Abhishek. Do keep visiting :)
      I did :) You have a cool Blog. Keep Blogging!

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  8. Aayesha S Hakim18 August 2014 at 11:45

    Emotions captured? And how?!!! Wow, Anita! :)

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  9. Rachna18 August 2014 at 12:07

    So tragic.

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  10. Priyashi18 August 2014 at 12:59

    Poem filled with emotions.... Lovely one Anita...:)

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  11. Vinitha18 August 2014 at 13:58

    Beautiful poem Anita!!

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  12. Bikramjit Singh Mann18 August 2014 at 17:38

    oh noooooo.. that was sad

    Bikram's

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  13. Sindhu Devi K18 August 2014 at 19:12

    Touching poem Anita... You make us melt... Nice photo too :) TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Anita Sabat18 August 2014 at 20:16

      Thanks Sindhu :)
      The photo is courtesy Shailaja- it's her picture prompt.
      Keep Smiling :)

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  14. Locomente18 August 2014 at 19:27

    Really beautiful...
    Heartfelt words :)

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  15. Jyotsna Bhatia18 August 2014 at 22:52

    Lovely response to the prompt :)

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  16. Unknown19 August 2014 at 09:52

    Eternal Love. Love your idea for the prompt Anita.

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    1. Anita Sabat19 August 2014 at 14:41

      Yes, that was my idea- Love after death & Eternal Love... Thanks Vidhya!

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  17. Anonymous19 August 2014 at 18:35

    'Mar b jaayen pyaar waaley, mit b jaayen yaar waaley, zinda rehti hai unki Mohabattein :)' Wonderful Anita :)

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    1. Anita Sabat19 August 2014 at 20:05

      Thanks for sharing the line of the song from the Hindi movie- Mohabbatein! Very apt :)

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  18. Shivani Singh20 August 2014 at 23:09

    Sob...sob...you've done it so well Anita...i fell like letting the tears fall...
    Love the pic by Shailaja too...has that feel of unwanted, uncalled for destruction...

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    1. Anita Sabat25 August 2014 at 10:10

      Thanks Shivani. But, please don't cry. Your words mean a lot :)
      Yes, Shailaja's pic is open for interpretation- I like to think of a happy butterfly on the way to a flower :)

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  19. Unknown25 August 2014 at 08:05

    wow nicely written anita..

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    1. Anita Sabat25 August 2014 at 10:11

      Thanks for stopping by, Sagar! Welcome here!
      Glad you liked it :)

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  20. Amrita Sabat25 August 2014 at 13:32

    Superbly written...very touching.......

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Your words mean a lot to me.