Thursday, 28 August 2014

My Starry Sky

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They accused & taunted me,
They killed me every moment…
Yet I was alive as I lived in fantasy,
Offering my two cents' worth to torment.

WILD LIFE
PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright – Madison Woods
That day when they crossed every limit,
I decided to leave their world unfair…
I followed my own compass with grit,
Till I reached a place beyond compare…

Starry Night by Alex Ruiz

Twinkling stars & heavens in my sight!
Having always aimed for the stars,
The artist in me squealed in delight!
My colors are free without bars...

As I gazed at the starry-sky,
Overwhelmed & thankful,
I knew my dreams would fly…
My canvas will be beautiful.



Linking it to Magpie Tales #234 
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61 comments:

  1. Bikramjit Singh Mann28 August 2014 at 16:09

    OH I am sure it will be ... one day it will be for sure .. BEAUTIFUL


    Bikram's

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    1. Anita Sabat28 August 2014 at 16:16

      Amen!
      Wish it's the same for all :)
      Best wishes to you too for a beautiful canvas of life, Bikram!

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  2. Josie Two Shoes28 August 2014 at 20:05

    What an uplifting verse about finding your own place in life and leaving behind that which isn't good! We can all strive for the life we dream of, we don't have to settle for that which cripples our souls. Thank you for sharing with us at Two Shoes Tuesday!

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    1. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 01:45

      Thanks Josie for your beautiful words & for the opportunity to share :)

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  3. Sandra Crook28 August 2014 at 20:18

    Very nice.

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  4. Anonymous28 August 2014 at 20:38

    I dreamt ..........

    Brilliant. :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 01:46

      When we dream & achieve, it truly is brilliant :)

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  5. Carrie Van Horn28 August 2014 at 21:00

    A beautiful canvas indeed......beautiful writing Anita!

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  6. Mary Hill28 August 2014 at 21:42

    Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
    Mary-andering Creatively

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    1. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 01:49

      Thanks Mary :) Delighted that you liked it :)

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  7. Anonymous29 August 2014 at 00:45

    Beautifully warm, inspiring and igniting hope in the heart:)

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  8. Unknown29 August 2014 at 01:49

    Beautiful Poem Anita. Loved the 2nd stanza.

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    1. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 01:53

      Thanks Vidhya! So glad! Thanks for sharing :)

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  9. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 01:51

    Thanks for sharing your wise words & your appreciation, Ashwini.
    I agree with you.
    We all have faced such situations and need to move on & prove ourselves & fulfill dreams :)

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  10. Anonymous29 August 2014 at 06:20

    I think your canvas already is. Nice Mag! Love and Light, S

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  11. Red Handed29 August 2014 at 17:40

    No doubt it would be beautiful
    You are getting better one post at a time :)

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    1. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 20:07

      Thanks Red :)
      Thanks to your love & encouragement :)

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  12. Rajlakshmi29 August 2014 at 18:45

    ohh how beautiful!! maybe you reach those stars :)

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    1. Anita Sabat29 August 2014 at 20:09

      Thanks Rajlakshmi for your appreciation & wonderful wish :)

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  13. Uppal29 August 2014 at 23:01

    YOUR POEM CONVEYS SUCH A POSITIVE MESSAGE ABOUT COURAGE AND SELF ESTEEM. A LOVELY POEM, NO DOUBT!

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    1. Anita Sabat30 August 2014 at 00:38

      Thanks a lot, Uppalji :)
      Yes, the message is to have the courage to walk out of negative atmosphere & discover a new world where we are free to pursue our dreams...

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  14. Tess Kincaid29 August 2014 at 23:22

    Beautiful canvas beautiful words...

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    1. Anita Sabat30 August 2014 at 00:40

      Welcome to my Blog, Tess.
      Thanks for your beautiful words :)

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  15. Richa Singh29 August 2014 at 23:28

    I always flounder at poetry :D but look at you flawless!

    Richa

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    1. Anita Sabat30 August 2014 at 00:43

      Thanks Richa. You are too kind :)
      Have to go a long way to be flawless...

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  16. Uma Anandane30 August 2014 at 02:23

    Loved the flow of the poem :) well done Anita !

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  17. plaridel30 August 2014 at 06:06

    nice take on the prompt. i love the positive spin on it.

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    1. Anita Sabat30 August 2014 at 11:51

      Welcome to my Blog, Plaridel :)
      I love positivity too!
      Lovely to hear from you.

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  18. Nabanita30 August 2014 at 16:01

    It's like a dream...what a weave...! Beautiful will be an understatement...

    Random Thoughts Naba - My Two Cents’ Worth on a Friday Night…...

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  19. brudberg30 August 2014 at 17:40

    To go into such delight - what bliss

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    1. Anita Sabat31 August 2014 at 18:21

      True Bjorn! May we all be blessed to be full of bliss!

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  20. Ankur Anand30 August 2014 at 20:11

    What a bliss it is !

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  21. janet30 August 2014 at 21:02

    And hopefully all the paint is free! :-)

    janet

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    1. Anita Sabat31 August 2014 at 18:23

      Colours of imagination are free :)
      For reals paints & canvas, we need to pay, Janet :) Else Sponsors needed!

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  22. Anonymous31 August 2014 at 09:13

    This is truly lovely. Alicia

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    1. Anita Sabat31 August 2014 at 18:24

      Thanks for stopping by, Alicia.
      Lovely to hear from you :)

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  23. Old Egg31 August 2014 at 11:09

    The natural world around us is a great inspiration in all forms of art. Yet some cannot see it with their eyes opened. Hopefully when we see such beauty around us it may see that in us too.

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    1. Anita Sabat31 August 2014 at 18:25

      Yes indeed. We all are works of art too. God's most intelligent creation...
      Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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  24. P.S. Joshi31 August 2014 at 13:17

    Anita, Lovely piece and beautiful picture to accompany it. : ) ---Susan

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    1. Anita Sabat31 August 2014 at 18:27

      Thanks a lot, Susan :)
      The pretty starry picture is courtesy the prompt.

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  25. Anonymous1 September 2014 at 17:50

    A very emotional and driven piece.

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  26. Anonymous3 September 2014 at 11:32

    Dear Anita, Wonderful job! I think I will stop reading these because it is so late - and your story is so marvelous! Can't do any better than yours! Nan :)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 September 2014 at 19:54

      Thanks for such marvellous words, Nan:)
      Means a lot to me.

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  27. Uma3 September 2014 at 19:46

    Loved the flow of the poem, Anita! I just love how you are able to weave multiple aspects into a single creation. :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 September 2014 at 19:55

      Thanks a lot, Uma :)
      Delighted that you liked it!

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  28. Maniparna10 November 2016 at 02:40

    Very positive thoughts, Anita... :-)

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  29. Unknown10 November 2016 at 04:11

    Sometimes it is important to cut the drama and follow your own path ....beautiful soul-sis:)

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  30. www.lifepartneracademy.com10 November 2016 at 12:39

    Beautifully crafted poem Anita. Keep it up!

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  31. Amit Agarwal10 November 2016 at 12:45

    Warm and positive! Loved it, Anita:)

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  32. Dipanwita10 November 2016 at 15:36

    Beautiful piece Anita. Reflecting hope and positivity. :)

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  33. Anonymous10 November 2016 at 19:04

    From darkness to light, from depression to boom, from dejection to elation...so much upliftment of the soul in these beautiful verses!

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  34. Unknown11 November 2016 at 02:18

    A beautifully weaved one! Loved every bit of it :) Kudos!

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  35. KathakaliM11 November 2016 at 10:21

    Nice one☺

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Your words mean a lot to me.

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