Saturday, 9 August 2014

Kismat

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I’ve always aimed for the stars with stars in my eyes & worked hard sincerely. 

But, I guess my Kismat* needs help as I haven't got what I deserve or the fruits of my effort rarely…

Last night when I prayed, I saw the moon dropped down to Earth just for me 
& I was about to touch it gleefully…


My celebrating wife & kid awakened me from my luminous dream rudely.

Clutching the morning newspaper in their hands like a precious trophy, 
they chorused, “You have won the Lottery;
We can now buy our own home finally & live happily!”


Björn 6
PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright-Björn Rudberg


Kismat* - is a Hindi word.
In English- The spelling is KISMET. It means Luck/Fate/Destiny


My 100 Words & Five Sentences Story-Poem for-

Five Sentence Fiction - Luminous, 
Friday Fictioneers- 8 August 2014 
& 
ABC Wednesday - K is For Kismat

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68 comments:

  1. Uppal9 August 2014 at 18:37

    GREAT SURPRISE IN THE FIVE SENTENCES!

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  2. Arpita Dash9 August 2014 at 19:51

    Nice choice of words dear, love this concept........

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  3. Aayesha S Hakim9 August 2014 at 20:31

    Such a happy post, Anita! :)

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  4. Unknown9 August 2014 at 20:44

    Wouldn't that be wonderful? I enjoy my job, but what a fine thing it would be to know I could take care of my family for the rest of our lives. I love dark work, but sometimes a happy piece like this is just what is needed!
    Thank you for visiting Poetry of the Netherworld.

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    1. Anita Sabat9 August 2014 at 21:02

      Welcome to my Blog! Thanks for stopping by & sharing such words, Aurora!
      My pleasure :)

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  5. Anonymous9 August 2014 at 21:16

    Beautiful and filled with hope. We can never know when destiny will smile on us:)

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  6. Anonymous9 August 2014 at 22:16

    Kismet Connection :-D wonderful words Anita, liked it.Cheers!

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  7. Saru Singhal9 August 2014 at 22:35

    Me too, me too want a knock on my door from kismat.

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    1. Anita Sabat10 August 2014 at 00:06

      We all do, Saru!
      May we answer the door when Kismat knocks :)

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  8. Unknown10 August 2014 at 01:02

    A kiss from kismat indeed....yet again you managed to bundle....You aimed for the starts and you indeed got the moon....Amen to your winning lottery numbers :)

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    1. Anita Sabat10 August 2014 at 08:45

      A Kiss From Kismat is wonderful indeed, Vidhya :)
      Aiming for the stars & landing up with the moon...& then winning the lottery- all this has to be in our stars... I believe in destiny.
      Amen! May we all win :)

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  9. brudberg10 August 2014 at 01:26

    Waking up rudely with something like that.. it has to be a bliss.. great to finally have the home you deserve.

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    1. Anita Sabat10 August 2014 at 08:47

      Luminous dream cut-short, Bjorn.
      But, I wouldn't mind with such luminous news & reality :) Bliss indeed!
      Thanks for the cool pic:)

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  10. Vinitha10 August 2014 at 14:34

    Superb story.. Its nice when kismat touches life unexpectedly!! :)

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    1. Anita Sabat10 August 2014 at 15:05

      Thanks Vinitha! Yes, hope that Kismat touches us all :)

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  11. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields10 August 2014 at 16:10

    Dear Anita,

    What a nice thing to wake up to. Love the picture.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Anita Sabat10 August 2014 at 16:13

      Yes, great news to wake up to, Rochelle :)
      The pic is from the FSF Prompt.

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  12. Dawn Q.11 August 2014 at 01:13

    I really enjoyed the magical element to this story. Lovely!

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    1. Anita Sabat11 August 2014 at 11:30

      Thank you so much Dawn for your magical words :)

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  13. Priyashi11 August 2014 at 11:26

    Lovely one Anita.... :)

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  14. Shailaja V11 August 2014 at 13:30

    Well, that's one nice way of waking up from a pleasant dream :) Great job with the prompts :)

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    1. Anita Sabat11 August 2014 at 22:30

      Yes, lovely to wake up to such great news :) Thanks Shailaja!

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  15. Anonymous12 August 2014 at 00:57

    What a lovely wake-up! :D

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  16. Anonymous12 August 2014 at 04:08

    Dear Anita, Good story and I love the picture of the crescent moon and the reference to the lottery! Very neat indeed! Nan :)

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    1. Anita Sabat12 August 2014 at 09:42

      Thanks Nan :) Love your feedback, as always :)

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  17. Aiswarya Moodadi12 August 2014 at 13:21

    Nice one! I liked the pic also :)

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    1. Anita Sabat12 August 2014 at 14:19

      Thanks Aiswarya :) Both the pics are from the prompts :)

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  18. Bikram12 August 2014 at 17:16

    indeed KISMET is a big help always along with hard work :) I wish my kismet wakes up and i win the lottery , i desperately need one

    Bikram's

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    1. Anita Sabat12 August 2014 at 19:32

      True. Amen! May we all win lotteries, Bikram :)

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  19. P.S. Joshi12 August 2014 at 18:14

    Anita, What a great thing to wake up to. Lovely picture of the moon coming down to earth. Well written. :) ---Susan

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    1. Anita Sabat12 August 2014 at 19:34

      Thank you so much, Susan :)
      The Moon pic is courtesy the FSF prompt :)

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  20. Anonymous13 August 2014 at 00:43

    I wouldn't mind waking up form a pleasant dream if lottery awaits. Uncle scrooge and green notes is what's on my mind now :D dunno why.

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    1. Anita Sabat13 August 2014 at 11:32

      Yes Shanx! We all feel so :)
      Sometimes we get what's on our mind in our life too! Best wishes to you :)

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  21. Shivani Singh13 August 2014 at 19:50

    Ahem and look at my Kismet...all I wanted was to see the real big moon on Aug 10 th when it was supposed to be closest to the earth...and of all those days of heat and humidity Delhi had to have a heavy downpour that particular day. Now I wait and watch if my Kismet let's me view any of those shooting stars that NASA says shall be happening in the skies...or even that other big moon when it happens again in September.
    :) ...kismet...hmmm...

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    1. Anita Sabat17 August 2014 at 12:52

      Hope to get all the things you desire in your Kismat, Shivani :)
      Wasn't aware of the fact that the moon was the closest on August 10th. It was Rakhi Purnima- full moon night...

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  22. Ruchira Khanna14 August 2014 at 06:40


    Trying to nail down many prompts in one!!
    Awesome take, Anita

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  23. Beloo Mehra16 August 2014 at 10:23

    And what a great kismat! The moon and the sun did shine upon the family :)

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  24. Unknown23 September 2014 at 21:19

    Kismat, karma all are but inevitable but you did have great one

    PhenoMenon, ABCW Team
    http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/09/kathakali-makeup/

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    1. Anita Sabat23 September 2014 at 21:39

      Yes, they are inevitable.
      Thank you so much :)

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  25. carol l mckenna23 September 2014 at 22:18

    Wonderful photo and post ~ loved the ending ~ Happy Week to you!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. Anita Sabat24 September 2014 at 10:48

      Thanks a lot, Carol :)
      Wish you a great week too!

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  26. Roger Owen Green23 September 2014 at 23:08

    I can never get the moon to land for ME!

    ROG, ABCW

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    1. Anita Sabat24 September 2014 at 10:49

      That happened in his dream! It was a blessing, Roger :)
      Best wishes :)

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  27. ellen b24 September 2014 at 01:21

    A very creative exercise!

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  28. Photo Cache24 September 2014 at 04:59

    I enjoy your writing.

    ABC WEDNESDAY

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  29. K V V S MURTHY24 September 2014 at 11:30

    Kismat is the key for anybody..nice job!

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    1. Anita Sabat24 September 2014 at 19:13

      Yes indeed. Kismat does come into play.
      Thanks :)

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  30. Unknown24 September 2014 at 15:44

    Well..... does anyone not need some kismet from time to time?
    I wish you lots of it!

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    1. Anita Sabat24 September 2014 at 19:14

      That's such a lovely wish, Melody!
      I wish you loads of Kismet too! Enjoy :)

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  31. Ann24 September 2014 at 20:14

    My dreams have included winning the lottery!! Hasn't happened yet!
    ann

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  32. Lady In Read29 September 2014 at 22:06

    enjoyed the read, Anita.. and you have inspired me to restart trying to work on all these wonderful memes (and together too) :) Hope I will soon

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  33. Anmol Rawat19 January 2017 at 00:44

    A climax that gives you satisfaction! :)

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  34. Unknown19 January 2017 at 03:07

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  35. Shrinidhi Hande19 January 2017 at 07:42

    mera kismat kab khulega???

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  36. M S Mahawar19 January 2017 at 09:55

    Beautiful Post!..really liked it!

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  37. Purba chakraborty20 January 2017 at 00:26

    Beautiful story :)

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  38. Amit Agarwal20 January 2017 at 12:22

    Great concept wonderfully executed, Anita! :)

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Your words mean a lot to me.

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