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Friday, 22 August 2014

Accidental Union


I was learning to drive a mini-bus when I met with an accident & revisited my past-life…
PHOTO PROMPT -Copyright-Roger Bultot
PHOTO PROMPT -Copyright-Roger Bultot
I was hurrying to the railway-station and I missed my train.

While I was waiting for the next, I saw him in the rain & it was love at first sight for me & for him too as he proposed when we boarded the train...

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A familiar voice said, “Help is here! I’ll rescue you, Miss!”

As he again took my hand in his, I thanked God for making me miss my train in my past-life & for the accident in this one…


(100 Words)

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This Post was adjudged as a WOW Post HERE.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
Include this line in your post: ‘….and I missed my train.’


This is also my 100 Words & Five Sentence Fiction for-
Friday Fictioneers
&
Five Sentence Fiction- Waiting

Also linking this to- IndiSpire- Edition#40 -  What do you think you were in your past life? Share the experience of your intuitions! #IntuitionofMyPastLife
Top post on IndiBlogger.in, the community of Indian Bloggers
If you liked this story about reincarnation, you might also like my Bollywood-style Story-Poem-
Tattoo Love-Story


Have you had a similar intuition? Do you believe in reincarnation? Do share.

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72 comments:

  1. Viyoma22 August 2014 at 17:59

    Interesting...so much said in so little words. All the best for WOW.

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    1. Anita Sabat22 August 2014 at 18:07

      Thanks Viyoma :) Delighted you found it interesting!

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  2. Anonymous22 August 2014 at 18:27

    Very interesting...enjoyed reading this:)

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  3. Anonymous22 August 2014 at 19:08

    Totally love the poetic words about love and life:)

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  4. Abhishek22 August 2014 at 19:21

    loved the short and excellent remembrance of the past life ... thumbs up for such devoted lovers... :)

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  5. Padhma22 August 2014 at 20:13

    Accident always takes us back to the past...a good take on the prompt!

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 13:09

      Welcome here, Padhma! Thanks for reading & sharing.
      Accidents may not be bad sometimes :)

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  6. Anonymous22 August 2014 at 20:30

    haha! Coincidences and miracles are alien to me :P Well written Anita :) Frankly, such a sweet post combining a north and south prompt now ;)
    Cheers to happy endings :)

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 13:10

      Thanks Shanx! Someday you'll experience them & be a believer :)
      Cheers!

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  7. Donna Burman22 August 2014 at 20:40

    Interesting post Anita.. Afterall everything happens for a reason.. :)

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  8. Shailaja V23 August 2014 at 00:35

    Ah, how opportune that the WOW prompt included a Train this time :D And there you go, successfully combining 3 prompts :) Well done!

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 13:23

      Thanks Shailaja :)
      Yes, I rubbed my hands in glee seeing the WOW prompt that fit in with my story :)

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  9. Anonymous23 August 2014 at 08:35

    It all comes together and her story comes full circle. Very nice!

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 13:32

      Welcome here! Thanks Amy for your sharing your view :)

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  10. Anonymous23 August 2014 at 10:30

    Superb take on this prompt.

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 13:35

      Welcome to my Blog! Thank you so much for your comment :)

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  11. Red Handed23 August 2014 at 12:18

    wow..two prompts at one go...genius!

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  12. Maniparna23 August 2014 at 14:41

    Nice one Anita... :-) a WOW write-up ..definitely .. :-D

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  13. Ankur Anand23 August 2014 at 15:40

    i thought you were learning after reading first para :P

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 15:58

      You mean the first line, right Ankur?
      Actually I visited my past-life after the accident (in the first line!) :)
      100 Words was a challenge, else would have described it a bit better :)

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  14. Cifar23 August 2014 at 19:23

    you have mastered the art of combining different prompts, nice story

    Diary Confessions - 7

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  15. Ranu 80223 August 2014 at 19:35

    I'm glad it worked out.

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    1. Anita Sabat23 August 2014 at 22:54

      Welcome here, Ranu :)
      Yes, great when God's plan falls in place!

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  16. divsi24 August 2014 at 07:35

    Wonderful! 100 words and one entire story :) loved it ani :)

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    1. divsi24 August 2014 at 07:36

      I think i missed your comment on my blog. Got a notification but cant see it:(
      Server issues:/

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    2. Anita Sabat24 August 2014 at 11:46

      Thanks a lot, Divsi :)
      Okay, over to your Blog now. Will post my comment again!

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  17. brudberg24 August 2014 at 14:17

    I think there are occasions when you know you're home.

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    1. Anita Sabat24 August 2014 at 14:28

      Yes, Bjorn. We know when we meet the special one...

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  18. Beloo Mehra24 August 2014 at 19:00

    How creatively you have combined three prompts! Really nice, Anita! You are quite a champ:)

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    1. Anita Sabat24 August 2014 at 19:53

      Thanks for your kind words, Beloo :) Delighted you liked my attempt :)

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  19. Datta Ghosh25 August 2014 at 10:09

    Two lives in hundred words...really WOW!!

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  20. Amrita Sabat25 August 2014 at 10:59

    Wooowwww! Superb post! Very touching.... :)

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  21. Madhavi25 August 2014 at 14:54

    Perfect bolywood movie in 100 words!!!
    Nice one!!

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    1. Anita Sabat26 August 2014 at 10:37

      Thanks a lot for the filmy connection appreciation, Madhavi! What else does a HUGE Bollywood fan like me need? :)
      Glad you liked it :)

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  22. Sindhu Devi K25 August 2014 at 16:15

    Finding good in whatever happens is the best attitude we can have! A sweet story... Well written Anita! TC! keep smiling :)

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    1. Anita Sabat26 August 2014 at 10:38

      Very true, Sindhu! Attitude is everything :)
      Delighted you liked it.
      Keep smiling :)

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  23. P.S. Joshi26 August 2014 at 15:40

    Anita, Interesting story, and a good romance with a happy ending. Well written. : ) ---Susan

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    1. Anita Sabat6 September 2014 at 23:18

      Thanks a lot, Susan :)
      Great to hear from you!

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  24. Kokila gupta25 November 2014 at 12:15

    Wow.. you beautifully made us live two 'loves' in 100 words ! Amazing and a true WOW:)

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  25. i b arora25 November 2014 at 12:22

    you did manage to say so much in just 100 words,nice

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    1. Anita Sabat25 November 2014 at 13:06

      Thank you so much!
      Yes kahaani of two lives :)

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  26. Bushra25 November 2014 at 12:27

    Have read this yet couldn't resist reading again! Beautiful Anita! :D

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    1. Anita Sabat25 November 2014 at 13:08

      Thanks Bushra :D
      Lovely to have you visiting!

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  27. AmitAag25 November 2014 at 12:35

    Very interesting...wonderfully done!

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  28. C Suresh25 November 2014 at 12:50

    Nice

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  29. Alok Vats25 November 2014 at 13:53

    So nice, I cannot think about how well you write a post in only 100 words :)

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    1. Anita Sabat25 November 2014 at 14:42

      Thanks for your nice words, Alok :) Makes me say Cheese!
      It's the same way as you share all those SEO & Blogging tactics with ease!

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  30. Unknown25 November 2014 at 15:03

    This is so happy and pleasant, so so liked it keep aside the accident where no one hurt....so well penned soul sis...muahhh

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    1. Anita Sabat25 November 2014 at 19:44

      Thanks a lot for your sweet words, Soul-sis :) Yes, we love happy endings :)

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  31. Vinay Nagaraju25 November 2014 at 15:13

    Soooper :) :).. I loved the first one :)

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    1. Anita Sabat25 November 2014 at 19:45

      Thanks! You mean you liked the past-life story better? :)

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  32. Veena25 November 2014 at 15:18

    Very interesting
    U deserve an applause for this....!!!

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    1. Anita Sabat25 November 2014 at 19:47

      Glad you liked it, Veena.
      Thanks a lot for considering me worthy for an applause! Honored :)

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  33. K.A. Acharya25 November 2014 at 19:55

    Everything happens for a reason. Nice one Anita. Have a great day!

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    1. Anita Sabat26 November 2014 at 13:26

      Very true, Kiran! Thanks :)
      Have a wonderful day :)

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  34. Indrani26 November 2014 at 11:52

    Nicely written. :)
    I liked the connection.
    WOW!

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    1. Anita Sabat26 November 2014 at 13:28

      Thanks for sharing & for your WOW, Indrani :) Yay!

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  35. Saru Singhal26 November 2014 at 21:03

    That's really interesting, I think I have read it before. There is mystic and a soothing calmness in this one.

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    1. Anita Sabat26 November 2014 at 21:41

      Thanks for reading. Delighted that you liked it, Saru :)

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  36. quotes12 November 2024 at 23:59

    nice poem with some interesting lines, captivating one

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