The four friends hugged together.
“We’ll succeed in our mission for our home, won’t we?”
“There's a place in Heaven for us, isn’t it?”
On D-day, they set out on a rampage.
Those terrorists killed many in the city.
Three of them were killed, while the police caught the
fourth.
“Who do you work for? Open your mouth, won’t you?”
The terrorist was given the death sentence.
After he was hanged, he awoke to be reunited with his
friends!
It does feel like home, doesn’t it?
It was Hell…
It was too late to ask- "God hates terrorism, doesn’t He?"
My Story for Write Tribe- 100 Words on Saturday- Question Tags
Nice words to express a social issue
ReplyDeleteThanks Huma :) Welcome to my Blog.
DeleteThis is good Anita!
ReplyDelete-- An empty corridor...
Thanks Siddhartha :)
DeleteYou expressed everything in just few words :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing :)
Glad you liked it, Karanvir :) Thanks!
DeleteVery good take on the prompt Anita
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thanks Tina :)
DeleteYeah. I guess he would have felt at home with his friends, even if it was in heaven.
ReplyDeleteTrue, Leo :)
DeleteAnyway, they were in 'Hell' before & hence were in search of 'Heaven'.
But, the fact is while they expected to gain an entry to Heaven, they actually got Hell as God hates terrorism...
Most unusual, Anita and very strong message too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Corinne :)
Deleteyou sent a wonderful message through your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi :)
DeleteYour message comes out stronger because of the smart use of questions tags. Very well structured.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinodini :)
DeleteYou have chosen a dark topic and it's different from the takes that I've normally read on it. Way to go, Anita!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Aathira :)
DeleteYou chose a very interesting topic to write on, enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteDelighted that you enjoyed reading it, Sulekkha :)
DeleteAn important message nicely delivered....loved reading it
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for reading & for the appreciation :)
Deletenicely worded .. enjoyed reading it !
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankur :) Great that you liked it!
DeleteYou are an awesome writer Anita! The quotes you are using make a lot of difference! Keep writing! TC! keep smiling :)
ReplyDeleteBTW, I haven't noticed your posts in Indiblogger since many days... Sorry, I couldn't pay a visit directly...
Thanks a lot, Sindhu! Always nice to hear from you :)
DeleteHaven't posted any for the past week as have been tied up & no time to Vote/Comment - that I think I must if I post to IB... I can post to IB, but then when I get the votes, I'll feel guilty if I don't Vote back! Will do when I have time on hand :)
I cant understand which religion teaches that killing a innocent will take them to heaven ..
ReplyDeletevery well expressed ..
Bikram
Thanks Bikram!
DeleteYes, can never comprehend why all this mindless killing. No God/Religion advocates this...
if only they knew. They r soo brainwashed by many to believe that their path was right.
ReplyDeleteTrue Red.
DeleteWhen will everyone start thinking rationally? Realize that every Religion upholds peace & love?
nice post! such delusional people go to hell for sure but after torturing hundreds of innocents...
ReplyDeleteTrue Ankita. How can they even do all this?...
DeleteGosh! What twisted minds! Very different take on the prompt, Anita! :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed Shilpa. Wish there was no hatred & killing & only love & peace...
DeleteThanks!
Really a good one. Light words on a powerful issue.. well expressed Anita
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera :) Glad you liked it :)
DeleteA very unusual take on the prompt...Good one :-).
ReplyDeleteThanks Jayanta! Delighted that you liked it :)
DeleteInteresting take.. Liked the quotes too! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Payal & for sharing your comment :)
DeleteThanks Vishal for your nice words :)
ReplyDeleteWell-penned with a useful message.Awesome.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading & for the appreciation, Rudra :)
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