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Friday, 27 June 2014

The Getaway


Getaway
Getaway
The getaway was successful.

City
City
The lovers reached their city & felt at home.

Nothing can match the comfort of a loved one.

Their life was like running-water- couldn’t relax in peace.

Running Water
Running Water

They feared those dangerous men might be following them…

They packed some food & their valuables. 

They had to plan another clever getaway soon.

Getaway
Getaway



This is my 55 Words Story for #55WordChallenge- Week 17


This Story somehow fits in as Part-III, a sequel of my previous stories-
Part-1- The Intriguing Connivance
Part-2- The Cathartic Risk
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9 comments:

  1. Sindhu Devi K27 June 2014 at 13:27

    Now I understand how can a mega serial have so much twists! They have story writing masters like you with them! Hmm, but, please give a happy ending only ! Keep smiling :)

    Regards,
    Sindhu
    Tantu
    The Arts & Me

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    1. Anita Sabat27 June 2014 at 13:36

      Thanks for such sweet words, Sindhu!
      Like you, even I love happy endings :)
      Keep smiling :)

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  2. Beloo Mehra27 June 2014 at 13:43

    You are right, it does fit as part III. But I hope the ending is a happy one :) Will they find a place to settle down and be happy ever after?

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    1. Anita Sabat27 June 2014 at 14:21

      Yes Beloo, even I do hope the same :)
      Would be lovely if we always have happy endings like in fairy-tales :)

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  3. Anonymous28 June 2014 at 00:20

    Love has never been smooth sailing and beautifully etched:)

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  4. Ankur Anand28 June 2014 at 01:01

    beautifully penned ! :)

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  5. Jayanta28 June 2014 at 23:07

    Nicely done, Anita...

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