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Sunday, 6 April 2014

The Unexpected Trap


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WOW- Trapped!

The actress looked stunning in that red costume and heavy make-up.

The movie shoot was on. 
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She tried to focus on her lines.

The director tried to retain his patience as she fumbled causing many retakes…

Everyone was also worried why the producer hadn’t arrived at the sets.

Only she knew that the producer would never arrive.

She had killed him last night when he had tried to force upon her…

But, she was shocked when there was an unexpected visitor.

It was the producer!

It was a trap.

Actually, the Police-Inspector had worn a mask with the producer’s face…



This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

This time we’re aiming at making it more creative! Your post must contain, ‘ It was a trap!’


This post is also for - Write Tribe's 100words on Saturday 2014 # 10 – an unexpected visitor

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This is a fiction for Friday Fictioneers - 4 April 2014.
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28 comments:

  1. Red Handed7 April 2014 at 00:14

    Now that was unexpected! Indeed!

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  2. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields7 April 2014 at 04:46

    Dear Anita,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. I think her acting days are over.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 16:41

      Thanks Rochelle :) This was the 2nd time I contributed to Friday Fictioneers.

      She must have told the police that the producer was at fault!
      Maybe they'd let her out as she had killed out of self-defence... :)

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  3. Vishal Bheeroo7 April 2014 at 12:47

    Wow! That's thrilling Anita and a suspense woven in a crisp manner. Superb:)

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 16:55

      Thanks Vishal for your kind words. Glad you liked :)

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  4. Soumya7 April 2014 at 15:38

    Whattey twist! Loved it.

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 17:10

      Thanks Soumya :) Delighted that you liked the Kahaani mein Twist! :)

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  5. P.S. Joshi7 April 2014 at 16:58

    Good story. She must have gone to pieces when she thought he came back from the dead. She should have called the police and reported the death right away. At least that's what I've heard in some murder mysteries. She needs a good lawyer. Well written.

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 17:17

      Thanks! Welcome to my Blog :)
      The Police must have zeroed in on her or on someone from the cast/crew. That's why they dropped in at the movie's shoot!
      She may not have reported out of fear or may be out of confidence that she'll be saved.
      Yes, now she needs a good lawyer & good friends like you & me! :)

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  6. Anonymous7 April 2014 at 20:37

    She would have told the truth out of fear....won't find any way out of the trap

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 22:34

      True. Now she'll have to present a strong case. Hope truth wins!

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  7. Unknown7 April 2014 at 20:39

    Aha, twist and double twist.
    Welcome to FF

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 23:22

      Thanks for stopping by! Welcome to my Blog! :)

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  8. CRD7 April 2014 at 21:40

    Reminded me of Bollywood movies of the 70s and 80s :d

    Nice :)

    Updated my blog. Do drop by.

    Cheers
    CRD
    http://scriptedinsanity.blogspot.in/2014/04/in-your-mothers-arms.html

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    1. Anita Sabat7 April 2014 at 23:23

      Thanks for visiting my Blog!
      Even I love Bollywood! :)
      I checked out your latest cool post!

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  9. Midnight scribbles7 April 2014 at 23:47

    lovedd the twist haha :D

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  10. janet8 April 2014 at 02:08

    That would be shock if you knew you'd killed someone and then thought he was back from the dead. I imagine it wasn't too hard to get her to confess.

    janet

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    1. Anita Sabat11 April 2014 at 11:41

      Very true, Janet. But, she would have earned sympathy as she was protecting herself & had no intention to kill...
      Welcome to my Blog!

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  11. Ankur Anand9 April 2014 at 02:21

    that was really twisted !

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  12. Anonymous9 April 2014 at 08:41

    Haha ! Looks like a good plot for thriller :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat11 April 2014 at 11:43

      Thank you so much :) Can be a thriller movie with a strong past & whodunnit mystery thrown in :)

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  13. RATNA10 April 2014 at 13:06

    I love your imagination and story telling style! Simply fantastic!

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    1. Anita Sabat11 April 2014 at 11:44

      Thanks for your nice words, Ratna :) Work as medicinal boost!!!

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  14. Unknown11 April 2014 at 14:47

    Anita this is a lovely twist !Great idea.

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    1. Anita Sabat11 April 2014 at 19:03

      Thanks Ushaji :) Glad you liked the twist & the idea :)

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