The movie
shoot was on.
She tried to
focus on her lines.
The director
tried to retain his patience as she fumbled causing many retakes…
Everyone was
also worried why the producer hadn’t arrived at the sets.
Only she
knew that the producer would never arrive.
She had
killed him last night when he had tried to force upon her…
But, she was
shocked when there was an unexpected visitor.
It was the
producer!
It was a
trap.
Actually, the
Police-Inspector had worn a mask with the producer’s face…
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
This time we’re aiming at making it more creative! Your post must contain, ‘ It was a trap!’
This post is also for - Write Tribe's 100words on Saturday 2014 # 10 – an unexpected visitor
This is a fiction for Friday Fictioneers - 4 April 2014.
Now that was unexpected! Indeed!
ReplyDeleteMust have been a shock :)
DeleteDear Anita,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Friday Fictioneers. I think her acting days are over.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle :) This was the 2nd time I contributed to Friday Fictioneers.
DeleteShe must have told the police that the producer was at fault!
Maybe they'd let her out as she had killed out of self-defence... :)
Wow! That's thrilling Anita and a suspense woven in a crisp manner. Superb:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal for your kind words. Glad you liked :)
DeleteWhattey twist! Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Soumya :) Delighted that you liked the Kahaani mein Twist! :)
DeleteGood story. She must have gone to pieces when she thought he came back from the dead. She should have called the police and reported the death right away. At least that's what I've heard in some murder mysteries. She needs a good lawyer. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThanks! Welcome to my Blog :)
DeleteThe Police must have zeroed in on her or on someone from the cast/crew. That's why they dropped in at the movie's shoot!
She may not have reported out of fear or may be out of confidence that she'll be saved.
Yes, now she needs a good lawyer & good friends like you & me! :)
She would have told the truth out of fear....won't find any way out of the trap
ReplyDeleteTrue. Now she'll have to present a strong case. Hope truth wins!
DeleteAha, twist and double twist.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to FF
Thanks for stopping by! Welcome to my Blog! :)
DeleteReminded me of Bollywood movies of the 70s and 80s :d
ReplyDeleteNice :)
Updated my blog. Do drop by.
Cheers
CRD
http://scriptedinsanity.blogspot.in/2014/04/in-your-mothers-arms.html
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DeleteEven I love Bollywood! :)
I checked out your latest cool post!
lovedd the twist haha :D
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteThat would be shock if you knew you'd killed someone and then thought he was back from the dead. I imagine it wasn't too hard to get her to confess.
ReplyDeletejanet
Very true, Janet. But, she would have earned sympathy as she was protecting herself & had no intention to kill...
DeleteWelcome to my Blog!
that was really twisted !
ReplyDeleteYes, Ankur! Tale with a twist!!!
DeleteHaha ! Looks like a good plot for thriller :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :) Can be a thriller movie with a strong past & whodunnit mystery thrown in :)
DeleteI love your imagination and story telling style! Simply fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your nice words, Ratna :) Work as medicinal boost!!!
DeleteAnita this is a lovely twist !Great idea.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ushaji :) Glad you liked the twist & the idea :)
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