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Friday, 7 March 2014

Yours Sincerely...



I wrote about them honestly, truly freely & frankly;

They lost all their senses & chided me furiously…

They said, “If you have nothing better to say, don’t say!”

I said, “But, you know that’s the truth & you only said ‘Satyameva Jayate*-

What happened to all your high ideals & the previous ‘acting’ display?” 


*Satyameva Jayate-  Truth always wins

This is a 55 Fiction, 5-Sentences Poem for Lillie Mc.Ferrin Five Sentence Fiction - Furious & Write Tribe Festival Of Words- Day 6- 55 Fiction

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42 comments:

  1. Ranu 8027 March 2014 at 04:21

    I like it thank you.

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  2. Rajlakshmi7 March 2014 at 06:42

    Very thoughtful 55 fiction.

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  3. KParthasarathi7 March 2014 at 06:50

    Ha,that is nice

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  4. Sushree Dash7 March 2014 at 09:10

    It's really good :)

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  5. Beloo Mehra7 March 2014 at 10:08

    Speaking truth isn't always easy :)

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  6. sugandha7 March 2014 at 10:32

    Really nice :)

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 17:07

      Thanks for stopping by, Sugandha :) Glad you liked it!

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  7. Tomichan Matheikal7 March 2014 at 12:17

    Actions and words don't match these days, eth?

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 17:23

      True Sir. Actions speak louder than words:)

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  8. Mridula7 March 2014 at 12:51

    The picture is so apt for the words!

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 17:40

      Mridula, the Pic is given along with the prompt 'Furious' by Lillie Mc. Ferrin :)

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  9. kalpana solsi7 March 2014 at 13:09

    Truth has to triumph.

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 17:41

      These days it is suppressed... Hope it triumphs always!

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  10. Kokila gupta7 March 2014 at 13:19

    Nice post Anita. The image also good ... Ruffled feathers!

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 17:50

      Thanks Kokila! Written for two prompts & the pic was given by them :)

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  11. Unknown7 March 2014 at 13:23

    Wah! Wah! ... This reminds me of one of my old rambling… here it goes.

    वो जो उतार देना चाहते हैं कविताओं मं अपने व्यक्तिगत दुःख
    हस्पताल मैं भर्ती हो जायें और डाक्टर को अपने दुःख सुनायें
    कविताएँ दर्द निवारक गोलियां नहीं
    किन्तु वो बन कक्ति हैं गोलियां जो दागी जायें उनपर
    जो कष्ट कई कारण हुआ करते हैं

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 17:57

      Thanks Sachin!
      Lovely that you have shared your thought-provoking thought lines here! :)

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  12. Unknown7 March 2014 at 13:46

    Funny as well as immensely meaningful.

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  13. Soumya7 March 2014 at 14:06

    Oh this was awesome! I so love the way you play with words so effortlessly! I so wish I could do that! :)

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 18:00

      Thanks Soumya! Blessed that one word-champ & effortless player of words shared these words for me :)

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  14. Michelle Liew7 March 2014 at 16:07

    The truth can be tough to swallow! Thoughtful!

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    1. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 18:02

      Right! But, can't understand why people so swear by truth & then act this way when it is out!!! :)

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  15. Amrita Sabat7 March 2014 at 19:28

    Very nice poem!Satyamev Jayate...

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  16. Arul Theerthagiri8 March 2014 at 09:31

    wonderful poem and funny

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    1. Anita Sabat9 March 2014 at 15:37

      Thanks, but it's more of a reality than a comedy :)

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  17. Bhavya Kaushik8 March 2014 at 11:09

    Truth always wins. Rightly said! wonderful poem indeed :)

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    1. Anita Sabat9 March 2014 at 15:38

      Truth wins...but it wins us enemies too, Bhavya! Very tough! :)

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  18. Anonymous8 March 2014 at 13:33

    Awesome post Anita :)
    The pic though funny shows the situation faced when we speak out some bitter truth :)

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    1. Anita Sabat9 March 2014 at 15:39

      Thanks! Yes, the bitter truth hurts even the people who claim they are truth-supporters!

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  19. Anonymous8 March 2014 at 16:52

    Beautifully said, Anita:) This is the plight of society and they don't wanna hear the truth:)

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    1. Anita Sabat9 March 2014 at 15:43

      Thanks Vishal. Yes, it is true & that's the truth! :)

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  20. Sindhu Devi K8 March 2014 at 20:09

    Good one! And the photo rightly reflects it!

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    1. Anita Sabat9 March 2014 at 15:46

      Thanks Sindhu! Yes, the photo given by Lillie Mc.Ferrin is so apt! :)

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  21. Shailaja V10 March 2014 at 11:12

    Uh oh! Now who did you annoy with your post? ;) Good take and lovely picture!

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  22. sjp11 March 2014 at 19:23

    Thought provoking indeed :)

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Your words mean a lot to me.