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Sunday, 26 January 2014

Sparkling Hitch!

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He was getting late for the Conference and was driving his swanky car faster than he usually did.
It was a divine conspiracy that on the road he managed to spot the pretty lady who wanted a hitch.
When he stopped his car near her and inquired, he felt blessed that even she wanted to go to the same place as he!
They travelled together to the same Conference where she was adjudged the winner & he happened to be one of the judges, who awarded her the prize.
Later, he proposed to her as sparks had flown the moment he had set his eyes upon her as it was love at first sight for him…

This is my Five Sentence Fiction for the Topic 'Sparks' for Lillie Mc.Ferrin Writes.

This is my very first entry for Lillie Mc.Ferrin Writes.  
Thanks to my Blogger-friend Aayesha Hakim for the info.
Lillie McFerrin Writes

The idea based here in five sentences is a part of my original story that I shared in my previous post.
For my detailed story & to know what happened before & after the sparkling hitch, do read my story - His Handicraft...

34 comments:

  1. That's very interesting Anita.. I love your posts :)

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    1. Thanks Naba :) Same with me as I love your Posts too :)

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  2. Summary of your previous post...but as interesting as the original...

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    1. Thanks Preethi. Yes indeed. This story is from the eyes of the hero as the previous one was in the heroine's words :)

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  3. Hmm - I recognized the story, of course. Great take from the other POV

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    1. Sureshji, Thanks!.. same story but slightly different perspective- the hero's story now :)

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    1. Hitch planned by the Lord :)
      Hitches & marriages & everything is decided by God :)

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  5. Oh, my mention at the end! :D Thank you Anita! :)

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    1. Great you noticed it, Aayesha :) Was planning to post a comment on your Blog to check it out! :)
      Got to learn of this site from you. Had to give you credit :) Thanks!

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    2. :)
      I follow your posts, anyway ;)

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  6. You're one story weaver!
    Keep It Up! :)

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    1. Thanks Poonam for the encouragement :) Love the support :)

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  7. Nothing like a story that has love at first sight :) Loved it Anita!

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    1. Thanks Pallavi :) Love at first sight stories are special :)

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  8. nice read.. keep writing :)

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  9. very interesting!!!
    Love @ first sight

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    1. Thanks Veena :) Story from the point of view of the hero! Do read the heroine's story too in my previous Post :)

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  10. What a sweet story... has the potential off a bollywood script mind you :)

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    1. Thanks Seeta! You spotted the potential :) Do read the previous tale :)

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  11. How exciting, I love happy sweet tales like these where cupid strikes with no fixed plans! Loved reading it Anita! :)

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    1. We love love-stories! :) We never know the plans of Cupid or God!
      Thanks Arti :)

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  12. Woaahh!! Its quite an interesting one, Anita! :)

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    1. Thanks Preeti :) Delighted that you liked :)

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  13. You need to write a bollywood script. You should :)

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    1. Woohoo! Thanks Soumya :) Great encouragement :) Would love to do so :)

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    1. You'll like the detailed story too, Indrani (my previous Post!). This was just a small version of the 'dreamy' story :)

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