I identified her Soul that she’s
the one & fell in love the first time I saw her. The beautiful woman who was previously my wife was
again in my fate! Sona kissed me and took me to her home. I wanted to tell her how delighted
I was to meet her in this birth too…
Bow! Wow! BOW!! WOW!!!
I could only excitedly bark
as I have been reborn as a dog!
Living-beings have millions of births &
deaths; human-beings may be reborn as dogs or even as Fly (Makkhi)…
My love is true. My soul
will follow my love wherever she goes…
| I follow wherever... |
I hated Jeevan, more so when I discovered that he’s
two-timing my Sona. When Sona was out for work for a couple of days, Jeevan got
cozy with his current-love- Misa.
Why can’t humans be loyal just like we dogs…? A b***** is far
more loyal & better than her human-counterpart like Misa...
When Sona returned, I
tried warning her that Jeevan & Misa are terrorists. Sona didn’t understand
my barks...
However, Sona
discovered many startling facts about Jeevan & Misa through emails & messages. She tried to report it to the Police…
The next day I woke up
feeling giddy. Some spray was heavy in the air.
Sona’s lifeless body lay with
unnatural marks in her own home. I was shocked that her own husband- Jeevan, whose name means 'life' had gifted her death...
I
started wildly stating the facts. They heard my loud urgent barking as I vented
out my anger…
I pounced upon that cunning Jeevan. They shot me dead…
My soul again wonders
carefree seeking my love in Earth/Sky.
When I meet her, I’ll know
the real-story what happened & why…
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Aww,,,I wish I had a pet like that.
ReplyDeleteYes, Wish we all had loyal partners & true love would last...
DeleteAn excellent work of creative writing and quite an engaging tale. Loved it completely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Upma :) Glad you loved it :)
DeleteCute. Very cute :)
ReplyDeleteEven sad endings end with positive note... of future meetings as true love never ends :)
Deletesweet one.. loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera. Delighted you loved it :)
Deletegood one :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my Blog, Ashwin :) Thanks for reading & sharing :)
DeleteWow a lovely post, Anita! Truly portrayed about this fake world!
ReplyDeleteThanks Preeti.Yes, Animal-friends are more true than supposedly sacred relations...
DeleteThe pinch of Bollywood is never missing even if its a picture ;)
ReplyDeleteanyways loved the post especially the lines in bold. :)
Anmol, I am intrigued by the concept of rebirth. Many Bollywood movies including the movie Makkhi (where the Hero is reborn as a fly & yet manages to take revenge) have dealt with it... & as you know, I love Bollywood :)
DeleteThank you so much for your appreciation :)
Gr8 post! Seems lik a creative extrapolation of Sunanda death. I love the post and actually concur when U say- why can't humans be loyal like dogs. Also last 2 lines r brilliant. Wow for sure.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed Amrita. You have read my mind :)
DeleteSunanda Pushkar death is unfortunate and it has set me thinking. I just put a few of my thoughts here... More to follow soon.
Dogs are very loyal. Some humans are too. But, wish their tribe grew...
Wonderful post, depiction of the two facets - loyalty and betrayal at it's best.
ReplyDeleteThanks Arti. I like Happy Endings. But, the current situation & news headlines have made me pretty depressed. Thus, expressed this tale...
DeleteNice post! loved the humor! I didn't see that movie yet, would love to give it a watch :)
ReplyDeleteAlthough, the name of our gang in college was "Makhi" gang, this gave me nostalgia :)
Thanks Bhavya. Do watch Makkhi.
DeleteProves that we can't get away with murder. Also, not to under-estimate the power of a small common-fly! :)
'Makhi Gang' sounds interesting like the 'Gulab Gang'! Now that's another promising must-watch movie :)
Chweet..Loved it..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Preethi :)
Delete:) Nice one Anita. I like how you weave your thoughts.
ReplyDeleteThanks Indrani :) Great compliment :)
DeleteNow that was deep & damn creative . :D
ReplyDeleteDo you have a thinking cap of some sorts?
Always love reading your Unique posts Anita! :) :) (y)
P.S. - And Makkhi is a great movie. Specially the awesome visual effects. Simply Top-Notch just like your posts! ;)
Nikhil, Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you so much! :)
DeleteYes, Makkhi has awesome visual effects.
Such encouragement, appreciation & Top-Notch comments are the fuel that powers my train of thoughts & Posts ;)
AH one more reason to want a dog!!!
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful.
Thanks a lot Red. Dog might have a past life's connection :)
DeleteDelighted that you liked it :)