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Friday 1 November 2013

Watch Woman!

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"Oh! Where's all the milk?
What about my bar of Cadburys Silk?

Where has my gold bangle gone?
I can't seem to find my old phone!

I'm sure there was a full packet of mithai*
It's halved; did it catch someone's evil eye?!

This is so strange! I can't fathom!
Is it the handiwork of some phantom?

Very surprising! I am shocked as can be!
Sherlock Holmes should have the key!

Wait! Why not I be detective?
Catch who's behind these acts furtive!"

I pretended to leave for office that day...
Checked in at the neighbourhood cyber-cafe! 

Entered the website and saw the 'live' coverage!
My home looked so sweet in the webpage!

Then I saw my main-door opened & shut
The culprit was now committing crime fataphat*!

One thing she didn’t know-
that she was being watched now!

It was my watchman's daughter!
Home-Security CCTV Technology enabled me to nab her!

I changed my watchman & my apartment's keys!
My lesson- Never hand over the keys, please!


*Mithai- Hindi word for 'Sweets'
*Fataphat- Hindi word for 'Fast'


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.



Write Over the Weekend theme for this week

This time entry must contain, ‘One thing he/she/they didn’t know that they were being watched.’

This Post won the WOW Badge HERE!
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39 comments:

  1. kalpana solsi1 November 2013 at 15:24

    Never handover the keys to anyone. nice read.

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    1. Anita Sabat1 November 2013 at 15:26

      Thanks Kalpana!
      Lesson learnt the hard way! :)

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  2. Proactive Indian1 November 2013 at 15:27

    Nice story.

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  3. Ankita1 November 2013 at 15:44

    Interesting! with a clear message :)

    loved it!

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  4. unpredictable sashi1 November 2013 at 15:47

    :) nicely written di

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  5. preethi1 November 2013 at 15:54

    Hey...different idea. That was a fast entry and a good one :) not easy to trust anyone these days...sad

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    1. Anita Sabat1 November 2013 at 17:27

      Yes Preethi! We have to be 'watch'ful! :)
      Thanks for your sweet words! :)

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  6. Aditya Manchanda1 November 2013 at 16:23

    very nicely written!!!

    Aditya Manchanda
    www.eatoutsdelhi.net

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  7. maithili1 November 2013 at 16:48

    Nice story in a poetic way :)

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    1. Anita Sabat1 November 2013 at 17:29

      Thanks Maithili! Delighted that you liked it! :)
      Incidents like this keep on happening & people wonder where things have 'vanished' :)

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  8. Anonymous1 November 2013 at 17:40

    good one :)

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  9. S.1 November 2013 at 20:19

    Awesomeness anita. I'm glad to see so many posts :D

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    1. Anita Sabat2 November 2013 at 11:19

      Thanks for your encouragement, Sunakshi!
      *Smiles* :) *Winks* ;)
      Best wishes to you too! :)

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  10. Rajesh1 November 2013 at 23:02

    That is interesting.

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  11. Anil Krishnanunni2 November 2013 at 04:46

    Hahaha! I had to read it twice to understand :D
    What a play with words! And rhymes are too good!

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    1. Anita Sabat2 November 2013 at 11:22

      Happy that it amused you, Anil!
      Thanks a lot for your appreciation! :)
      This story is pretty common as trusted people are rare!

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  12. Anonymous2 November 2013 at 13:19

    Technology came to the rescue...So,Two Lesson here--Never trust anyone blindly and Always make the full use of technology.. :D
    Nice Read Anita.. :D

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    1. Anita Sabat2 November 2013 at 20:04

      Right lessons! Very correct observation! Full marks to you! :)
      Let's use Technology & Trust to our optimum advantage! :)
      Thanks Harsha!

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  13. Unknown2 November 2013 at 15:49

    Poetry, story, security tip, moral - a beautiful combination. Loved it.

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    1. Anita Sabat2 November 2013 at 20:06

      Thanks for the cool combination comment, Geeta! Glad you liked it! :)

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  14. Anonymous3 November 2013 at 10:27

    Interesting post :)

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  15. Sangrywords3 November 2013 at 14:57

    Really ?? Omg scary .. But did she just take the food?? or anything else ??

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    1. Anita Sabat3 November 2013 at 15:40

      Sangeeta, We never know that things are missing, till we look for them & can't find them even in the places they are supposed to be...
      Food going missing is ok in a way that we can get a substitute, but certainly not for unique items like Gold etc. Many of my Mom's precious belongings- Silk-sarees, cash, jewellery, watches etc went missing...Sadly no Technology's help was taken, but the she knew who the culprit was as only one person had the keys!

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  16. Prasanna Rao5 November 2013 at 10:04

    A true story. It's so difficult to trust anyone these days.

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    1. Anita Sabat5 November 2013 at 13:09

      Yes indeed, Prasanna!
      This is KalYug! Trust is rare! We better beware!

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  17. Anita Sabat5 November 2013 at 13:07

    Thanks for stopping by! :)

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  18. Unknown5 November 2013 at 18:21

    Wow!!!wonderful take on the prompt through poetry. Very creative, indeed.

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    1. Anita Sabat6 November 2013 at 18:23

      Thanks Jini! So lovely to get your Wow comment! :)
      I love making up rhymes! Glad that you liked it! :)

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  19. Cifar7 November 2013 at 12:40

    brilliant poem

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    1. Anita Sabat7 November 2013 at 17:28

      Thanks Cifar! Glad you liked it! :)
      Thanks for stopping by:)

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  20. Uma Anandane11 November 2013 at 21:16

    Great Anita! It really work with my recent post on the security gadget. Thanks for dropping by :)

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    1. Anita Sabat12 November 2013 at 03:04

      Thanks Uma! Yes, it certainly does! Many stories for this WOW prompt were about CCTV! Home Security is a must! :)

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