Busy working on my Research-Paper,
My breakfast I attended absentmindedly...
A burning smell emanated from my Toaster,
Instead of the Bread, I had put my CD!
What an Idiot! But I sprung to action faster!
To set things right before my act's discovery!
But, my hubby-dear's nose proved smarter!
Though the Perfume-Spray's effect was speedy!
Moral-
1. We must mind it! Use our mind before doing any work!
2. We cannot and should not hide anything from our loved ones!
Note- Not a true story.
Inspired by a TV advertisement in which the model tries to insert a piece of bread in his Laptop (thinking it is the CD) & then realizes from the smoke from his Toaster that he has accidentally put his CD in the Toaster!
Shows how our busy lives make us so absent-minded that we end up doing such idiotic things...
Used this idea to present a 55-words Poem!
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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ReplyDeleteEven after the burning smell & fragrance! :)
Deletecute :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ujjwal :)
DeleteLovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bushra :)
DeleteLoved it! Keep writing more posts like these :p
ReplyDeleteThat's so encouraging, Bhavya! Thanks :)
DeleteGood going
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteA unique take on the prompt - totally enjoyed it. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, Abhra! Thanks :)
DeleteHahaha :D that's too funny Anita. CD instead of bread. Hahaha
ReplyDelete2 words of the Prompt- 'CD & Idiot' reminded me of the TVC, Pallavi :) Added the 3rd word- 'Perfume' :) :)
Deletelol interesting take on the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera :) Glad you liked it!
DeleteThat's a nice story..leaves a lot of space for imagination about the after effects :-D
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna!
DeleteSometimes, the cover-up doesn't prove to be effective as our act is discovered :) But, bad state if that CD had important info!
That was short and cute....simply Wow!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shaivi for your Wow comment. :)
DeleteInteresting!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting & sharing, Shaifali :)
Delete:D Smart!
ReplyDeleteThanks Indrani :)
Delete(The Poem may be, but burning the CD definitely wasn't smart!) :)
Lol :D
ReplyDeleteDelighted :)
Deletelol :D
ReplyDeleteInnovative! Interesting!
Loved it
Thanks Anmol :)
DeleteGlad you loved it :)
:D Innovative idea for a poem..Hilarious...
ReplyDeleteThanks Preethi :) Delighted that you liked it!
DeleteBummer! caught with a burner is a bummer after all.
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Indeed Rupertt! Hope no one has this extremely disappointing & depressing experience with burnt CD :)
DeleteA toasted CD and a WOW badge.
ReplyDeleteToasted CD is absolute no-no! But, Wow badge yes-yes! :)
DeleteShort and lovely. Congrats for the WOW.
ReplyDeleteDelighted you loved it! Thanks a lot :)
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